Date: 09/10/2007 - 02:11 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
aw, the sex was sweet.
Date: 04/05/2006 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
This is all I can do: :D
Fantastic!
Date: 04/05/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Yeah.. seems as if Dawn and Connor have indeed forgotten about her mom a bit. Because they didn't miss her.. Only Elizabeth and William really know and remember. ~ I wonder if these two will make it. Being together I mean *wonder what you have in store for us* and if the four can escape.
Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Ugh, whenever I read a smutty story whereby Spike tastes himself, I can't control myself.
xO! Your story's getting too hot, girl. All that 30 chapters of UST simply exploded. I can't wait to read your updates.. I really hope we can see something from the William end as to how he feels.
Thanks for sharing, I'll be waiting eagerly for your updates xD
Author's Response: I told you it would be worth the wait. It took them so long to finally give in to their feelings, but now that they've crossed the line they've got nothing holding them back. As for Wiliam's feelings, I will definitely try to put some of his thoughts in, but it's hard when it's a first person story from Buffy's POV. There will be more conversations though where Will reveals his thoughts to Buffy.
Date: 04/05/2006 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
That was good! I hope you'll be posting more really soon because I can't wait to see what's next !!
Date: 04/05/2006 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Elizabeth and her dirty mind. And their stupid mother for disregarding her kids. Wonder how her and Wes are doing... Loved their little game, and our Spike is quite the sensual wordsmith. Really wonderful chapter. Absolutely still with and loving this story. Please, update soon.
Date: 04/05/2006 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Ohhh nice chapter! Dont worry about the delay in updating... I can totally understand the whole working is kicking your butt thing!! Back to the story... it was nice to see Buffy in a more controlling role with their intimacy since usually its William taking the lead! I liked the chapter and cant wait for the next one, even if it is a long time till the next update, it will be well worth it!
-Ashley-
Date: 04/04/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
hot but I can see trouble lurks ahead...can't wait for more!!
Date: 04/04/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Great chapter. Definitely worth the wait. I liked the end, where he just held her. Was nice and intimate. Looking forward to more, as always. : )
Date: 04/04/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Hot chapter! Loved it! Please update soon!
Date: 04/04/2006 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Finally! Just Kidding! I understand! Loved the chapter! please post very soon! :)
Date: 04/04/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Well that was sooooo dam hot,You have left me speechless. and thats it.
Date: 04/04/2006 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Yay for an update, finally! I hope you will start updating on a more frequent basis!
I think no matter what happens they do need to stay as brother/sister. As much as it is morally wrong, this is a story and if you want to follow in the steps of Flowers in The Attic, they need to stay blood-siblings., just like Cathy and Chris.
I've noticed you haven't brought Dru or the mom into the story lately (or even giving the twins dialogue) which is fine with me, I love how you have been focusing solely on Buffy/Spike.
That was a hot chapter, glad to see you took my advice about doing an oral scene! Thanks hon!
Date: 04/04/2006 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Well I just found this fic and have read it all the way through and i have to just say this.... I FREAKIN" LOVE IT!!!!!!! Man you have put so much into this fic that the characters feelings seem so real. I know that this is a VERY touchy subject but you have handled it quite well. I'll be here.... waiting impatiently for the next update ;). Kuddos on a job well done sweets!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you found it and like it.
Date: 04/04/2006 - 11:17 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
that was amazing!!! please continue!!!
Date: 04/04/2006 - 08:35 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Woohoo, update! Worth the wait Jen! Buffy taking control was great and her thinking was funny (should I swallow or not, best swallow if don't want to choke. LOL)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. I'm trying to show that they are new to this sex thing and I hope I'm pulling it off. He'll be having some "am I doing this right" moments as well in the future.
Date: 04/04/2006 - 05:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
Please,please, figure out a different storyline for the ending..Somehow they can't be brother and sister. These two are just to hot together to be brother and sister and not end up having a life together.
Grrrr...Their Mom is really ass. Didn't even care about those sweet little twins...
Date: 04/04/2006 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
hmmm... it seems like she is realizing more that it is Will instead of thinking of the game.. I wonder if he is doing ths same too.. she refers to him in her head and how she thinks as Will more... is he thinking the same thing or is he concentrating on the game?? I hope ther eis some way they can get together!!!! I am looking forward to, and hope that it will happen, when they finally have sex as William and Elizabeth.... but anyhow... luved the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but took too long!!! Update again soon!!!