Date: 05/05/2006 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Forty - One
Hey. Even though I haven't reviewed for you before, I've been reading this story on adultfanfiction.net before that crashed. I LOVE THIS STORY!! Your the first writer (that I know of) who has done a story like this. Its so wrong, yet so right. I love it. Keep up the fantastic job and I can't wait to read more. Oh, and I'm soooo happy that I found you on this new site. :)
Date: 04/24/2006 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter Forty - One
loved this chapter!! I can't wait till you come back and give us some more!!! Please update w/ lots of chaps when you come back!!!
Date: 04/24/2006 - 03:35 am Title: Chapter Forty - One
So conner and Dawn remmeberd there mother who was no longer there mother..It seems the twins had been talking between them selfs..Yes i also wounder what else they have been talking about..And what was Spike and Buffy thinking,right next to the twins..They are smarter then is to believe..Conner and Dawn!"
Date: 04/23/2006 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter Forty - One
Well, that was just plain hot. lol. Good song choice for this chapter, too. And it seems that the perfect cover-up of Spike and Buffy is fading... I always got the feeling that Elizabeth would be the first one to forget.
And it was smart, that last sentence in the paragraph. "He kissed me before I could say his name as I came." It leaves us wondering, was she shocked? hurt? thankful?
Then the last sentence of the chapter: "I was definitely ready to move on the the next part of the evening." It adds on to the wonder of the other sentence. Was she needing to forget she'd almost said his name? or was she just horny as hell? lol
A great chapter, and I can't wait until the next!
Date: 04/23/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter Forty - One
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nooooooooooooooooo
I was sooo there...Right there....and then...and then...
It stopped......
*whines* Take me back there...xD I cant' wait until what happens next...I'm so glad she got the keys without getting caught =O *sigh of relief* But....i wanna know what happens after they put the kids to bed...xD Meanie xP Okay my rants done, I don't wantcha to get mad....and leave meh hanging...so on to the next chapter....xD
Date: 04/23/2006 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter Forty - One
So hot, as always.
Date: 04/22/2006 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Forty - One
Oh so he does remember! Wow kids are more insightful than you think. Dawn and Connor seem to have a better handle on their mother than Will did for a long time. ;)
Date: 04/22/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Forty - One
Great chapter!
Date: 04/22/2006 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter Forty - One
You are evil to leave us hanging like this! I want more, more more!!! I can't wait for the sex scene ;) If they manage to escape, how will they live their lives? Where will they live, will they be able to find jobs etc., I can't wait to find out. I noticed Beth started to call him "Will" instead of Spike!!!
Date: 04/22/2006 - 03:45 pm Title: Chapter Forty - One
Man..All I can think of now is how these two are going to emotionaly handle this when they finally get out of that attic. They are so much like a real couple..I think they are falling IN LOVE with one another..*though they already love each other like siblings)
Hope that they soap ideas works for them...they need to get OUT ! Thanks for the update : D
Date: 04/22/2006 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter Forty - One
Oh I'm more than ready for the next part too. That was a sweet entre, but more more more!! Am so much in love with this story.
Date: 04/22/2006 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter Forty - One
Have fun :) Dawn is wise; she noticed that her mom (the behaviour) had changed. "She's not our mom anymore."" Thanks to google I know now what s'mores is :) Hopefully they can make the key. And they were lucky that the twins didn't wake up. :) Or did they? We'll see. :)
Date: 04/22/2006 - 06:44 am Title: Chapter Forty - One
I can't believe they did that with the children next to them!
Funny how they just planned their sex position on forehand *lol*.
Nice to hear the twins speak about their family.
Enjoyed the chap, as always! *grins*
Bye!
Date: 04/22/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter Forty - One
He remembered, how diabolical of him. A very hot chapter... and it seems that they've begun to step away from their alter egos a bit. Great chapter, the normalcy amidst a terrible situation. Loved it. Looking forward to your post vacation update.