Date: 09/11/2007 - 02:14 am Title: Chapter Forty-Two
oh, hot sex. Though it's kind of hard to imagine the type of sex they had, with Will on his knees and Elizabeth on her side. But like Buffy said, it took a lot of courage for him to ask [her]something so intimate. I like that.
Date: 05/21/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter Forty-Two
Well, I hope your world is looking up. It would seem that I missed an update a little bit ago. But that did mean I had two waiting for me today, and that's always a good thing. Very hot chapter. Love that they're willing to try new things.
Date: 05/14/2006 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter Forty-Two
Please continue, it be very cool if you continued! I REALLY wanna see what happens......teheh. GOOD LUCK FINDING A JOB!! I bet youll find a kickass one so dont give up :)!!
thanks!
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Date: 05/14/2006 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter Forty-Two
OMG! Loved the chapter!!!! Where have you been?! LOL! I was going to email you but I was busy and I thought that you might be too! Great Chapter! You have to post like now! :)
WL
Date: 05/14/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter Forty-Two
Ppffft...*if* we're still interested? Jenny, you gotta know there's no "if" about it lol... Check for an update every day, I do. :D
Loved this chapter, and the expression of the trust to 'Spike and Buffy'... they had it with 'William and Beth,' but it sort of goes along with the connecting of the two different relationships in that Spike still needed reassurance from Buffy, even though he knew he had it from Beth. And the same for Buffy. It's really a great thing to add to the plot, even if you didn't mean to do it :P.
Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for reassuring me that I still have some readers! I hate having to take that much time off in between chapters. Hopefully, I can start updating quicker again.
Date: 05/13/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
Hot chapter! Looking forward for the next update!
Date: 05/13/2006 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
At some point Buffy has to get pregnant. While incest is plausible albeit frowned upon, having that much unprotected sex without conception occurring is not. I hope you come up with a solution or explanation for this if she doesn't end up getting preggers sometime soon.
Barring that, I have no other complaints about this fic. I was skeptical at first but I think you've done a good job with the taboo premise. You were careful not to rush things and when you did get to the sex, you made it understandble how this could happen, not to mention it was totally hot! *g*
Author's Response: Although I understand that pulling out is not the greatest method of birth control, I just can't bring myself to make her pregnant. They have enough on their plates without that extra worry. And I wanted a lot of sex in this story because I thought there should have been more in the book -LOL. I will touch some more on the birth control and pregnancy issues throughout the story. Hopefully it's enough to ease your mind.
Date: 05/13/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
First: Glad you were able to update :) Second: Wow, that was hot. Third: "You know I'd do anything for you." I really hope they'll get out of the attic and are free. And maybe a happy end? Though I don't know how yet. Good luck for your search :)
Author's Response: I promise there is going to be a happy ending eventually. I do have a sequel lined up. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/13/2006 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
That was worth waiting for :)
Date: 05/13/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
I hope the job search goes well. Good bit of Spuffiness in this chapter. :)
Date: 05/13/2006 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
Yet another HOT chapter..you are very good at writting sex..lol That was a brave thing for William to ask Buffy. Especially in lew of their situation. When William talks about thier experimenting..he is trying to convince himself that is all this is between them. Experimenting..something he may try to later label and stowe away one day as " just two young kids experimenting together" What they are doing is way beyond that and will have conseqences mentaly if not physically..Elizabeth is being way more realistic about it it seems to me.. Thanks for the great update!
Date: 05/13/2006 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
Thanks for the update! I really love this story and hope you will continue with it. You should post on Live Journal, you would be fabulous on there.
Date: 05/13/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Two
Wow -that was a hot chapter! It was worth the wait for the update :)