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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Will's smart, making another key. and Bethy is smart, getting the condoms, hee.

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

I am completely addicted to this story. I love it!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Well, this was an exciting night... and to imagine that mom has been so close the whole time. That woman has some issues. I hope they manage to blend successfully into the woodwork. We all hope they get out of there at some point, and boy do we not want to ruin Joyce's relationship with Wesley by revealing her 4 children she keeps locked in the attic. A marvelous chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: Death_Dealer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

ugghhh, evil cliffhanger, evil cliffhanger!!! OMG you've got to update like within the next day or so. I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens. UPDATE!!!

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

ooooh exciting exciting whats going to happen next? :)
Thanks for updating!! yay!!!

Reviewer: Samantha_78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Oh I also wanted to add, when is Will going to go down on Elizabeth? They have been sleeping together for several months now and he still hasn't? Doesn't make sense to me.

Author's Response: Funny you should ask. Without giving anything away, I think you'll like the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 11:06 am Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

You're killing me ;)

Reviewer: Lyndsy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Great and amazing chapter I can't wait for the next one please update soon

Reviewer: jealousy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Oh that is a truly evil place to leave off. Bad jenny! ;)

Reviewer: Samolly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

This just keeps getting better! What a cliffhanger!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Great chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Glad you took a break from the smut to write a more plot-driven chapter. I think the story and W/E was in need of a breather from that.

Um, was Elizabeth about to let Will use their mom's vibrator on her, without even washing it first? Even for me, that's a little too pervy for my tastes. LOL.

Author's Response: I love seeing your reviews -- you crack me up. The problem with the smutless chapters is I don't get as many reviews. Obviously, all of my readers are perverts - LOL! As for the vibrator, I don't think Will was going to actually use it on her - just a little above the clothes teasing, though I'm assuming Joyce would have washed it before she put it back in the drawer?

Reviewer: Kerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

This was an intense chapter .Current stage it to map out the house and make escape plans , then the actual escape it self . I loved it .I have no doubt that they will eventally get out , hopefully all four . My big concern is have they thought of what they are going to do when they do get out .? No money , no family to go to . With luck while exploring the estate they will find an insane amount of cash just sitting around .
That's what annoyed me about the movie itself , you see the three sibling walking away , but never get to see what happened to them . I suppose like many movies , it leaves you to make your own assumptions on what happened to them afterwards .

Author's Response: I'm glad you want to know what happens to them after because I do plan on doing a sequel which will deal with their lives after the attic.

Reviewer: Samantha_78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Great chapter!!!

I loved the part with the vibrator lol and I'm excited that she took some condoms....will Joyce notice that 3 are missing? Hmmmm.

Please update soon Jenny.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Good to be sure and make a second key. Not many doors were open where they could go, but they found at least two. The condoms may come in handy Buffy found.. hopefully they won't get missed, but she took only three. Too bad as it looks now: Seems as if Joyce is coming back. Hopefully they won't get caught or not able to get out till it's too late to go back! Till next chapter :)

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Oh man... this chapter was intense!! I couldn't imagine being that room after knowing your mother and kinda abandoned you!! Can't wait to see who the voices are coming from and what is gonna happen next!

-Ashley-

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

O my god Nooooooooo.Thats it. thats all I got.

Reviewer: Amarysso Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

We can always trust you to keep it hot! LOL Lovely update. I liked their idea of making a second key, in your story they are less naive as in the original, I like your views better. I was wondering how you would make this scene go because in the original this is where they discover a kama sutra book, which happened already in your version. Love that you kept it naughty. Please update quickly I'm very curious about the next chapter, are they going to see Joyce and Wesley have sex?

Don't worry about not chosing me as a beta, I can't compete with Megan and Andrea. You're lucky to have them beta'ing your story.

Author's Response: The great thing about not remembering a lot about the book is I know the major plotlines, but I don't necessarily remember the details as to how they get to those points so I can make it up as I go along. At least, I think I am - I didn't remember them finding a kama sutra book in the book, but I guess it must have been hidden in my subconcious. And thank you for volunteering as a beta - I got such a great response that I wanted everyone who volunteered to be my beta, but I thought that was going overboard. It was hard to choose who to have do it, which is why I ended up with two as it was!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Ahhhh...Don't leave us hangin' like that! LOL

Can't wait to see and hear what William and Beth witness while hiding in the closet..Surely they are not going to get caught!? Can't WAIT for more : D

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter Fourty-Four

Ah! Cliffhanger!! She is a conservative thing only taking 3, I wonder if they will try to wash them out. It is a good thing Will is a fast thinker or they would be done for! Good chapter.

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