Date: 09/16/2007 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
That was really hot sex.
Date: 02/05/2007 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Wow... scary punishment. I have grandmother issues as well, but I can't imagine someone doing that to anyone let alone their granddaughter! Evil. Great fic.
Date: 11/27/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Um that thing with the oil really does work don't ask how I knwo though okay Lets say my dog had an unfortunate accident with our driveway...
Author's Response: I actually looked this up on the internet b/c I wanted something that actually worked and made sense. Good to know that my research wasn't for nothing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thank you for all the reviews.
Date: 08/21/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
I hate what Dru did to her. William is such a sweetheart in not caring what Elizabeth looks like, because he loves her anyway.
Date: 08/05/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Very very shiny story, please update soon!! And don't tell anyone but you give V.C. Andrews a run for her money *winks and uses her wiles to get you to update*
:p aaah Chris is even more cuter as Spike:D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That makes me feel wonderful.
Date: 08/05/2006 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
I would get my hair cut more often too if that was the reaction I got!
Date: 08/02/2006 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Indeed. Dru sure is a nut. I hope Dawn likes the haircut. And though it was rediculously hot, I wonder if leaving a bit mark on Buffy's neck was the greatest idea he's ever had. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 08/01/2006 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
What a great chapter. I thought it was very sweet the way Will helped to clean Elizabeth. I also loved the sex scene. It was really hot. It would be funny if you do a scene where Elizabeth walks in on Will and he's measuring his you know what. I really want to know how big he is. Also, can you try and do a sex scene for them in the shower. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: For you, I'll fit it in. Be on the look out soon.
Date: 07/31/2006 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Damn that sinister, twisted Dru. Ok, I figured the hair punishment was coming but it's still nasty. I really hope that William and Elizabeth get revenge on not only Dru but on their heartless bitch of a mother. Oh by the way, awesome bathroom sex scene. Great update, as always!!!
Date: 07/31/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
I like that you still keep some things from the book!
Date: 07/31/2006 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Dru = bitch. Smut = hot salty goodness. : )
Date: 07/31/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Yeah, it was kind of gross how in the book he peed on her. hahaha I like your method much better!
Author's Response: Yeah, I toyed with doing it, but in the end, I just couldn't.
Date: 07/31/2006 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Yeah..it's hard to beat the tar in the hair punishment! I mean she's a teenage girl..couldn't be more sinister...So I don't blame you for going that route at all. I do like the bathroom scene after they removed the tar though..Very hot!! Can't wait to read more : )
Date: 07/30/2006 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 07/30/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
That chapter was well worth the wait!! I loved it!! Love love loved it!!! Excellent work!! You were able to express the scene so well, when I first started reading it I was actually frightened for Elizabeth because of what happened!! Great work!!!
-Ashley-
Date: 07/30/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Gasp! What a bitch dru is - I wish they'd be able to pour tar all over her and leave her to harden an artic wasteland! So glad they had some oils handy. And the hot bathroom sex - smoke time after that scene. Excellent update (I love the dual persona thing you are doing cause incest isn't my thing but I don't even think about it that way when they call each other Buffy and Spike). However, I have to kinda agree with Buffy's assessment somewhat - I don't think this would of happened between them if they weren't so "hormone driven" and locked away from all other humans. So I'm not blaming them for what's going on sexually (but I think when they get out, there will be major therapy sessions to attent). More please. I love it!
Date: 07/30/2006 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
God, what a complete evil B*tch, Dru is. I was horrified when I read what she did to poor Elizabeth. I would have been ready to cry right along with her if she'd had to lose all her hair.
Good to see William still wants her though :) Not that I didn't think he would. Oh, they are in it now. I have to ask, Does Will mean it when he says he loves her and NOT in a sisterly way the way she thinks?
Great chapter, hon.
Author's Response: This is our William. Of course, he's in deep. Always in love with the one he's not supposed to be.
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Oh... My... God. Just, fantastic. I LOVE the novel by Virginia Andrews, and I always wondered whether somebody out there would have the guts to re-write it Spuffy style.
Just to let you know, this is an amazing story- and I love what you're doing with the original Flowers In The Attic plotline.
Great Great stuff- I will be reading on.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it!. And it took me two years before I finally had the guts to post this story. I was freaking out about how people would take the incest thing, but from the positive response I've gotten so far, I'm glad I did it.
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
How gruel.. tar? ow did she manage no to get caught... (Dru)
Yeah, she must have done something in their meal. Good that the oil got some of the tar out. *sigh* Now they have to cut it. Good thing is it will grow again. And Buffy is so insecure that she'll loose Spike. But it seems Spike showed her that it won't be the case :)
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Drusilla's punishments get more and more sadistic. . . . and yet, they fit her perfectly (both canon and in the Flowers stories, since the grandmother was twisted).
Elizabeth and Will are treading a fine line about their feelings -- and she's swimming in that river while he's just letting it carry him away.
I wonder what the fall out will be.
Date: 07/30/2006 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Wee! Update! Great chapter, hot sex-scene, love it! *lol*
I really liked Spike's proclamation of his feelings for Buffy and how Buffy thinks about it. Even while having an incestious relationship they still see it as a taboo. Buffy is desperately trying to keep the brother/sister relationship separated from their sexual relationship.
Date: 07/30/2006 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven
Yowza!! That's really hot. :)
But... what book?
Author's Response: There is a book called Flowers in the Attic by VC Andrews that this story is loosely based on. I haven't read it in a really long time, but I remember it being good (though not enough sex). I thought it deserved a Spuffy rewrite (with a lot more sex). There's 4 or 5 books in the whole series. I would recommend it, but wait until my story is finished so you won't guess my plotlines!