If I havn't read your story before, I would think Joyce was the best mommy in the world, just understood. A really sweet bd for Buffy.

I like Buffy being tuff.

poor Buffy, always 2nd best to mother. But even though it was "ookie," morning wood, hee!

I love the Summer's pout!

Of course, this chap. makes me wonder why you didn't call Elizabeth "Buffy", but it's because you were thinking ahead about the alterego. I love DM, I'm glad they were included in the story! But also, I don't mind Buffy not being totally innocent. She had fun with Parker, which is good. I'm not a Parker-lover, but we dont' need to see Elizabeth as a weak person, under the thumb of an abusive or jerk boyfriend...so it's good she had good-times with Parker, though I can't remember if he becomes a jerk latter on.

I can't remember if I ever commented in this site. But I love your story, and this is a re-read of it. I know you are doing this story by memory, and thank god that Buffy doesn't sound like Cathy (I think that was her name). Cathy was always saying "Golly Lolly" or something. In fact, I went to read the book because of your story. Though he train station is next to the manor in the book, while the family had to go through Sunnydale to get to the manor. So I can imagine them escaping will be much different. unless the train has a station next to the manor, but Dru was afraid Ethan might notice. Anyway, back to the re-read!

Dat wuz da shit. I just wonder why dont they switch into buffy n spike wen dru comes around. Maybe they could find a martial art book and learned how to fight. I have seen da movie but i like ur fic better. Write more plz

This is so hot!" And So SAD.To be theown into this impossable life in the Attic.How are they going to cope with someone else.Dam Drusillia,Dam ener Mother,So dam evil.What is going to happen to these 2?? So SAD.

hi there. Here is m first review. I´ve seen this story around for quite some time, but the fact that William and Elisabeth are siblings, kinda scared me off. But eventuall I decided to try and read some. And what I found was a cleverly written story, an interesting storyline and plot and an intruiging story. That you have Elisabeth and William roleplaying as Buffy and Spike works really good and has many dimensions to it. Keep up the good work !

Author's Response: Thanks for deciding to give the story a chance. I knew the subject matter wasn't going to be for everyone, but I wanted to write so that it wasn't just an incest story to squick people out. Thanks for reviewing!

You're updates are worth waiting for. Loved the smut. Glad Buffy finally acknowledge to herself her true feelings for Will. Also, liked how you foreshadowed the things to come.

Author's Response: I'm glad I haven't lost you and that you are willing to wait. Hopefully, the next one will come quicker.

Was a great chapter! Glad to see ou are back...hope things become easier for you now!

Great update! Can't wait to read more!

How come all I ever get is flowers and a card? Hmmm? Guess I'll have to be more creative in my demands in the future LOL! Excellent update, well worth the wait. Still with you on this cause it's just so delicious! More please!