Date: 05/11/2007 - 09:44 am Title: The Pitch
I didn't think that it was painful. Now if there was some raunchy angel-buffy stuff goin' on, that might have been a little bit painful. Good start, I like it already!
Date: 10/02/2005 - 07:43 am Title: The Pitch
Okay chapter, a bit too much Angel for my liking, but still a well writed chapter.
Date: 08/24/2004 - 12:06 pm Title: The Pitch
I made myself late for work reading this story. This is great!
Date: 08/13/2004 - 01:50 pm Title: The Pitch
Could Buffy be any more foolish? Although you've explained Buffy's twisted sense of duty, I just don't get it, it's not as though Angel saved her life or something. Please give Buffy a backbone. And does she really expect Spike to remain in the sidelines or be second best?
Date: 07/26/2004 - 01:00 am Title: The Pitch
And I'm still compltely hooked. What's more I'm invested, angsted, and biting my nails. Maybe a metoer could just hit Angel or something. That'd be good.
Date: 04/16/2004 - 09:19 pm Title: The Pitch
Love the story very lovely characters and hop thier well be some spuffy coming up
Date: 02/25/2004 - 06:28 am Title: The Pitch
Ooh... I like this. Original idea, one that is very intriguing. I'm looking forward to delving into the history of the Giles family - seeing why Spike is the black sheep - and especially some interaction with Buffy and Spike. Well, more interaction, anyway... I count his checking her out as interaction. :) More please!
Date: 01/23/2004 - 01:53 am Title: The Pitch
Yucky angel and Buffy sex. No more sex unless its between Spike and Buffy.
Date: 01/12/2004 - 12:53 am Title: The Pitch
Hey--it wasn't a sucky chapter!! Background chapters are necessary to lay down the groundwork for the story... Please update soon--this sounds like a really good premise :)
Date: 01/11/2004 - 07:16 am Title: The Pitch
It wasn't to bad with the Angel and Buffy sex. Although I was a little shocked it was there! LOL! I can't wait to read more. Sounds like it'll be very interesting.