I love your concept of making the Spuffy story based on 4 funerals and a wedding, but it would have been much better if you expanded the stories by at least twice the chapters more, like explaining how Spike and Buffy discovered their feelings towards each other, etc.

I can see briefly that Buffy had came to fall in love with Spike, but other than some "weird expressions/looks" in Spike's eyes, all I could tell was that he loves Drusilla and Drusilla only.

Still, a very good try. Hope to read more of your stories. TC