well i'm sorry but i'm gonna have to be the naysayer here. this story had potential with the whole spike being human thing. but....the characterizations were simply awful here - everybody was completely wooden and robotic. You didn't get the voices right at all. The subject matter called for a much longer story to develop the characters more. Spike would NEVER have been such a passive wussy wimp like he was here. and when he first saw willow and xander? willow kept calling xander sweetie over and over. their relationship just did not ring true at all - none of the relationships did. sorry - i usually don't leave a review at all if i don't like the story, but this one just got on my last nerve. but at least you tried and that is a good thing.

Another fic with a good start. Look forward to more.