Date: 10/19/2005 - 09:35 am Title: Chapter Six
This is a terrific fic.I assume after Buffy's makeover William will emerge into the oh so sexy Spike.I just hope that after his transformation William will not let it go to his head.I hope he will not become friends with those people that have teased and shuned him over the the years.And I really hope he sticks by Buffy and not go out and sow his wild oats with other woman
Date: 10/19/2005 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter Six
Looking forward to the transformation.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 09:13 am Title: Chapter Six
great story! can't wait for more. please updatre soon.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter Six
another awesome chapter! I don't think Buffy is acting Faith THAT much-yeah, she's being a little skanky but not in a homicidal murderer kinda way that Faith did. Anyway, please update soon I'm loving this fic!
Date: 10/19/2005 - 07:37 am Title: Chapter Six
Hi Addie... i must say, i really don't understand how your buffy could be seen as a faith type. She is self-assured in the sexual department (maybe 2 guys didn't walk away from her the morning after), but she is caring and lovingly as usual. And william is just "as we know him", with some little help on the road to free is inner spike... can't wait for that! I know that there could be a little angst confronting the others, but i hope that al least things between them will always work fine!
Date: 10/19/2005 - 05:59 am Title: Chapter Six
Bah, she's not Faithlike at all. I think you're doing a good job and I really like this story, so far. :) And yeah, from canon, you definitely get the impression that Buffy was far from inhibited in the bedroom.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter Six
Awwww cuteness!
Date: 10/19/2005 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter Six
Yay! Let us begin the great Spikeing up of William. Wohoo! And I don't see Buffy as Faith-like at all. They are similar in their casual attitude towards sex but that's about it. Buffy isn't being selfish or detached in her sexual behaviour like Faith was.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter Six
I just want her to fully love him not just sexually. Emotionally and supportative of him and his life. Remember she leaves at the end of the school year. I like this chapter, please quit making her say fuck when she wants him.
Author's Response: I'm writing the story, and therefore remember full well the set up. I also know what's coming and what I have planned for it. Not to be rude, but I am the one writing this story, and as the author, I've chosen to do things a certain way for a reason. Those reasons will be made clearer, but in the meantime, let me tell my story the way I would like to.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter Six
I really love this story, shy william is just sooo cute and enchanting! I can see why people would think she resembles faith, shes aggressive and talks dirty, but what makes her so unlike faith is that she cares as great deal for william. I look forward to each new chapter!!
Date: 10/19/2005 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter Six
an emendment to my review. This is not meant to be a bashing in any way.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter Six
I have mixed feelings about Buffy in this story, Yes, she's helping him feel better about himself, yet it seems all she thinks about is the sex part. They're not really doing much else. I would hate to have him feel like just a sex object. He could really get hurt emotionally and I sure would hate to see this happen to him. It would be nice if they actually went on a date or go out in public. and find something besides just sex to bring them together. Just my humble opinion. This meant to be a bashing.
Author's Response: Give it a little more time. I have reasons for Buffy's focusing on sex, etc. Also, there will be more interaction between them in other places, too. It's only been a couple of days...
Date: 10/19/2005 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter Six
I don't think Buffy acts like Faith in this fic at all. I love that she is going to help William show off his assets and I can't wait to read the meeting with his mother. More as soon as you can please.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter Six
I just got to read this fic and ....Wow. It's really really good. I don't think you portrayed Buffy as Faith at all.I really hope you update soon.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter Six
I love this fic! I don't think you've portrayed Buffy as Faith-like at all. Aggressive!Buffy + Innocent!William = Happy!Braat44 :D
Date: 10/19/2005 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter Six
LOVE IT! Want more please, much more! Soon?