Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
While I appreciate your words of thanks to your loyal readers, might I offer a suggestion? Throw us a bone, girl! I know you gave us angst warnings and that you've asked us not to get testy about things. And, really, I'm trying. But I've had a bummer of a week and some Spuffyness, or even the hint of a promise of some, would go a long way toward making things better. C'mon, Addie, just a crumb? As always, I'm eagerly (though not quite patiently) waiting for your next update. Thanks again for all your hard work.
Author's Response: I'm sorry your week has been bad, but honestly, I'm not here to cheer up one person. My week's been less than stellar, too, but when it comes right down to it, I have to do what I feel is best for MY story. I feel that a well developed story needs a little conflict. If you don't want to read it,, that's fine, but I'm going to write the story the way I see fit.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Loved the fic!!
I really hope william doesn't give up like that!! He has to talk to buffy!!
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
UUGGHHH.....I don't think I can take much more....
I do love the story though...please post soon...pretty please
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This is a great fic! I hope u reunite them soon!!!
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Definitely a quick read that is leading me to alter my stance on all human fics. Instead of dismissing most of them- yes, I do have my exceptions- out of hand once learning that they are all human, I'm actually taking the time to read some of them. Need is quickly climbing my ranks of well written AH. Thank you for writing it.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
great update just one question though i am not complaining but how much more angst will there be ?
Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Entertain me some more. . . please. . .
This chapter was just. . . wow. William's emotional turmoil came through beautifully and damn. . just really sad and sweet and heartbreaking all at once. Here's to the hope that William doesn't give up and decides to be stubborn and fight for her.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This fic is really original. It's a mature high school fic that's more like college because there aren't any parents. Your writing is excellent and I can't say enough good things about this story.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i feel bad for both of them. i hope they work things out. can't wait for more. i hope it comes soon please
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Okay..I'm sad right now because of my NEED to have these two together (Spuffy Forever). This chapter and the last one were well written. The angst is good but I miss the smut...lol sorry I'm a dirty bird...lol. Looking forward to the next update. aLSO, you're very welcome. I'm certainly enjoying the story. Its the first fic that I've read of yours and I'm anxious to read others.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
ThankYOU Addie..for doing such a good job..You are a talented writer.
I like the way you did the last chapter in Buffy's perspective, and then did this one in Will's.. Poor Will..*sigh*
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
We should be thanking you.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
and aint that just how it goes for young love? Great chapater!
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
ok still being patient but William can't live without her. I do like how he told Cecily off though.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i love this fic! i love how you went from what seemed like a pwp to this amazing story. i just hope they work things out soon cuz all this unhappyness is making me feel sad for the characters. PLEASE update again soon and bring our fav couple back together!!
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Something really bothers me about Buffy...she seems to think William is this big time jerk from her perception...but in reality, she broke up with him, she hasen't made any effort to reconsile with himor talk to him at all...and now she is basing these assumptions of a 5 second interaction she didn't care to stick around for. (Although it was a bad part of an interaction :P)
Hope they can work it out soon.
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Oh... the beginning of the chapter had such promise.. and now the confusion is even greater than it had been before. Very quick update. Have another one of those up your sleeve?
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Ah sh**! William, just over and get the girl!
This was so sad and so heartbreaking and so love in peril!
Please get these two back together, soon.
(Thanks for having William reject that bitch Cecily, I just hated her!)
spuf
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
awesome! that's it , just, asesome
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
aww sad! when will it get happier?? i loved it though...update soon!!