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Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

Oops at me for not reading this chapter before :/ But I've read it now...and the beginning and the flowers was very sweet...and you're doing a great job showing how anxious Buffy's been...and the ending was very sad but it also was realistic :)

Author's Response: I'm trying to respond to all of these wonderful reviews! Thank you, thank you. spuf

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

I see.. yes, it would Buffy pain if she would lost the baby through death after she adopted it. Awe, Spike is acting gentlemanlike towards Buffy. And Buffy felt alone after he left. Seems to me she is more eagerly to accept Spike in her life since before. Grrr. Riley. He thinks he'll get Buffy back? He doesn't know her a bit. And the roses (and the card) were so romantic :) *sigh* I feared it would be one of the babies. *sigh* Yeah, life is short. ~ Good chapter!

Author's Response: Buffy is fragile, but then again, she's not. It takes a certain tough little cookie to do what Buffy does in this fiction. The fact that she is sensitive about it is not a weakness; it's an asset. Especially to Spike who adores Buffy. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

Sounds like the l-bomb might soon burst forth from Buffy's mouth.

Author's Response: Oh, she's close, but this is Buffy! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

great job. you had to add the agnst in their to keep the story moving though it was sad.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, the angst had to happen because this is the reality of the situation. spuf

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

good update i loved it

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you love the next one. spuf

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

Enjoying the story.

Author's Response: Thank you. I promise that the angst won't be too harsh after this. This is Spuffy, through and through. spuf

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

Great chapter! Could have kicked Riley for even wanting to get back with Buffy after hurting her so badly......and having the nerve to ask Spike to step aside! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. How like an arrogant prick like Riley to think he could just step back into Buffy's life! spuf

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

This is a great story, keep the updates coming!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter will be mostly Spuffy loving! spuf

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

Wow !! Out of all heartbreak, something is learned. I guess Buffy is learning something about life and maybe how to live it. Great chapter and thanks

Author's Response: That's the thing; Buffy needs to learn to live again. Giving yourself over to limbo because some idiot guy breaks your heart? That's a waste of life. Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

Go Spike, kick that Rileys arse...god it doesnt matter what story I read, I love it when Riley is the bad guy!!Poor Buffy hope she doesnt regret her decision, roll on with the Spuffy ,Spuf( try saying that fast ten times):)

Author's Response: Yeah, I love a bad Riley too! Maybe because he was so damned self-righteous in the show! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

*sniff* That was so sad, and so beautiful...Poor little Quentin.. The death of someone precious does have a lot of power. Not just the pain, but it can make you face your mortality..How fragile life can be.. I really hope that this is a turning point for Buffy. Not just while she is grieving Quentin.. Spike really is to good to be true. It was so sweet how he cried with her..her pain was his pain.. *sniff again*

BTW...Riley just sucks..I really liked how Spike handled him though. The nerve of him asking Spike to step aside..humff!

Wonderful update, probably the best so far in my opinion..Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yes, poor Quentin was rather doomed from the start. I want his death to give Buffy some insight into how short and precious life can be. Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Broken Hearts'

Okay, you got me teary with this one. I have to say though, I guessed that was going to happen. It's just horrible to lose a baby, even if the baby isn't yours. I could imagine how Buffy felt. I really hope that making love to him won't just be about comfort and it would be something that she really wants. I wouldn't want her to regret it. This was another amazing chapter, spuf! Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you. I have to say that I get some of my most beautiful reviews on this fic. I don't want you to worry; Buffy doesn't give her body or heart away quite so easily, at least not in this fic. spuf

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