[Report This]Date: 05/10/2006 - 09:23 am Title: 23 - On the Move
LOL... Elizabeth's disguise must be fantastic. I loved the lighthearted scene where the girls were flirting with Elizabeth and Spike was teasing her through the claim. It's good to know the Order is in shambles and Spike and Elizabeth can finally seek out the meaning of Darla's mysterious comment. Wonderful update!
Author's Response: Thanks. ... Yeah, I thought that part was funny
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2006 - 03:38 am Title: 23 - On the Move
Awww...her hair is short now...that's too bad! I'm glad they haven't been capture yet. Being the vessel doesn't sound like a good thing. It sounds like it requires something to take over your body or for it to be drained completely and neither is good at all. Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: Thanks for continually reading this story.
[Report This]Date: 05/02/2006 - 02:29 am Title: 22 - Sunnydale
Can't wait to find out what Darla meant! I must admit I still like Sera more htan Elizabeth! Elizabeth is too weak in my opinion! Great chapter!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Well I'll try to give Elizabeth more back bone ... I'm thinking she will in the future. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2006 - 04:04 pm Title: 22 - Sunnydale
Great chapter! Can't wait to figure out what it all means!
Author's Response: Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2006 - 12:22 pm Title: 22 - Sunnydale
So things changed for Buffy and Spike but they adjusted. Oh wow prophecy (a dark cloaked figure). Spike is the key; so Buffy is the lock? But both not ready yet? They (Spike) will wield great power indeed, but Spike is incomplete (he has no soul but so far he seems complete. I wonder what he should be missing). ~ This was unexpected; first the Order found our two again and then the prophecy seems to unfold: Elisabeth is marked and now Spike is too, similar to her. If the vessel has awakened then the other will awakened as well. Does that mean Spike? He felt stronger. Looking forward to find out more.
Author's Response: Hope you continue to enjoy reading this. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2006 - 03:00 am Title: 22 - Sunnydale
I enjoyed reading about Spike and Elizabeth's life together. I liked the intriguing new twist in this chapter. Elizabeth and Spike's new adventure looks like it's gonna be really interesting. Can't wait to find out where things go from here. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yup their future will be full of twists and turns.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2006 - 02:51 am Title: 22 - Sunnydale
Well that was a very important chapter! My head is spinning with all the information that was in there..Unfortuantly not much of it is really making sense yet..I have SO many questions. But I am trusting the old addage...Good things come to those who wait..lol Spike is the key and Buffy is some sort of vessel. The amount of thought you put into this plot boggles the mind...GREAT JOB!
Author's Response: Thank you. I know it might be a little confusing, let's just say that Spike and Elizabeth have a very interesting future in front of them.
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: 21 - Had to Do
Your summary doesn't give anything away ;-) ~ So what will Spike do? "Because you have my heart and I would sooner dust than part with you." Awe :) Like I hoped.
Author's Response: Thanks. More to come ...
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 08:16 pm Title: 21 - Had to Do
Poor Elizabeth...I was hoping she wasn't gonna suffer much longer, but it seems like she still has a lot to go through. At least she has Spike, hopefully he can help her get through it! I hope it ends well for them!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, both of them are going to face a lot in the coming chapters.
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 12:52 pm Title: 21 - Had to Do
So glad Spike did the right thing! Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:36 am Title: 21 - Had to Do
That was completly heart-wrenching..but very beautiful..*sniff* Buffy ran away to make it easier for Spike to break the claim..She gave him the chance to end her existence so that he could be happier..That is truly love...but....
Spike really came through with his own statement of love. He is turning his back on EVERYTHING..basically his Mother, his elders..his chance to live a "normal" vampires life. He loves his Sera/Elizabeth too much to say good-bye. I was a bit worried with the conflict he was feeling in regard to Dru..but I felt in the end it was really no contest on who he would choose. This is a fantastic Love story..A love to last the ages. I am sure that the angst is still going to be coming in waves..but Spike has made his choice..so bring it on ! : D LOL
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much. That makes me feel so good inside.
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 03:22 am Title: 21 - Had to Do
interesting and more interesting! i was wondering if they meet up with the scooby gang in good ole sunnyhell or not? i can't wait to read more! please update soon!!!
Author's Response: They will eventually... yup more stuff going to happen.
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 01:58 am Title: 21 - Had to Do
*breathes a sigh of relief* I knew our boy would never turn his back on his mate. I enjoyed reading Spike's thoughts as he made his decision. Great dialogue between Spike and Elizabeth, especially when they renewed their claim. Wonderful chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next phase of Spike and Elizabeth's unlife together.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it and that it was believable.
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long
It's good to see they reaffirmed the claim. I wonder how long it will last... Oh, Dru saw the soul and now the others know. Spike should break the claim? I gave her a slight nod then stole into the night after Elizabeth to do what I knew I had to do. I hope it is what I think it is what he'll do. He never said what he intended. Till next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review cordy. Hopefully you'll like the next chapter too.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2006 - 09:56 pm Title: 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long
Spike doesn't deserve Elizabeth if he's even thinking about breaking the claim. As it is she's totally without family. Life with Dru won't be better than before because she'll always prefer Angelus. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you.. yup, I agree. Spike doesn't deserve Elizabeth if he ends up breaking the claim. We'll see what happens in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long
Oh...NOOOOOO!! Please don't tell me that Spike is going to break the claim between between him and Elizabeth/Sera!! Dru is just thrilled over this new development....isn't she? She could never stand Spike loving Sera.. I have to be honest here..I know that they are vampires..not humans...but....after all the Love and devotion that Sera/Elizabeth has shown Spike..I am really upset that he was wondering if things between him and Dru could be better..I know the soul thing has taken it's toll on him..but they are MARRIED really!
I hope Dru doesn't get her way..Now I can't WAIT to see what is going to happen next! Great update : D
Author's Response: Thank you and I'm glad to see that I've established how much they love each other... and it's just the beginning... their relationship will be tested a lot in this fic.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2006 - 10:00 am Title: 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long
Fantastic update! You did a great job of setting up all the pieces so that Spike would have to make a choice between the family or his mate. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2006 - 07:38 am Title: 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long
Let him do it I reckon. If they're truly mates breaking the claim will hurt more than help him and might go some way towards lifting the hold Dru still has over Spike if the last few lines are anything to go by. Enthralling reading...more soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks. ^_^ All will be revealed in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2006 - 07:34 am Title: 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long
i really hope that spike just takes her away in a typical william fashion. when spike's loves he doesn't abandon his love, right? anyway, i love your story and am really curious as to what the powers cursed her with a soul for, it'd be hilarious if angel got one too! ha, stake him indeed!!!!
Author's Response: That's true and this Spike does love her trully, he's just conflicted at the moment.
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2006 - 06:43 am Title: 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long
Oh my god. That's all I can really say. I'm jumping in my seat, in anticipation for the next chapter. And ooh, if you're going to jump into the future after/if Spike breaks the claim, I'd love to see him beg and plead for forgiveness ^_^
Author's Response: We will be going a few decades into the future soon. ^_^
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2006 - 04:25 am Title: 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long
Wow...I will be VERY disappointed if Spike breaks the claim! I can't believe he's even considering it. Poor Elizabeth will be all alone if he does. If he does, then he's a bastard who doesn't deserve her. I can't wait to read your next chapter! I was ecstatic when i saw your update! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad that there are readers out there that seem to be enjoying this. I'll update as soon as I can.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2006 - 10:35 pm Title: 19 - A First
I'm glad they're more together now! I still am disappointed about the soul thoug but I understand that it's your story to write out! I still love it anyways!!! Update soon PLEASE!!
Author's Response: Thank you. The soul thing is essential to the plot and thanks for understanding.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2006 - 09:36 pm Title: 19 - A First
Great chapter! Too bad Elizabeth felt the slayer was her last choice. Glad Spike got to her in time!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yup, she got a little depressed but Spike helped her out in time.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2006 - 08:11 pm Title: 19 - A First
I thought Spike would take Buffy to China... but they went with the whole family. ~ So Elizabeth is bound or more the soul is bound to Elizabeth now. I'm glad that Spike remembered that Elizabeth was his priority; not getting Sera back. I wonder what plans were made for her, Elizabeth. She's fighting a slayer now? Ah, thought so: she wanted to die. But her plan failed. I'm glad. ~ Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. Yup, Spike got to her in time. He wouldn't allow a Slayer to take his mate.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2006 - 08:00 am Title: 19 - A First
Spike and Elizabeth's adventure in China sure started out on an exciting note. Poor Elizabeth feeling so desparate she felt the need to seek out the Slayer. I'm glad Spike found her before she got dusted. You did a great job with Spike's fight with the Slayer. I'm really looking forward to learning more about Elizabeth's destiny. Good update!
Author's Response: Thank you. Elizabeth's destiny is quite important. ^_^
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