Reviews For Where There's a Will There's a Way
Reviewer: lori Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Positions
Date: 03/24/2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Positions
Interesting build up. "Football" captain Spike makes it clear why Angel and Xander have to play soccer. Interactions between the captain and the soon-to-be student trainer will be fun. I can already picture the innuendo about Spike needing Buffy to work out the "kinks." On to chapter 3...
BTW, hate to nit-pick, but noticed there/their and breath/breathe switches in beginning and when Willow rambles.
Author's Response: Lol... yeah there will be innuendos hehe *g* Thanks for reviewing and I really do appreciate the feedback and corrections... I will fix!