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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 08:59 pm Title: Fouled

Oh my and there I wondered why Spike didn't react - this triggered bad memories. I hope Buffy can get out of this.

Author's Response: you shall see! next ten chaps are pretty intense!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 04:33 pm Title: Fouled

I have to say that this was an extremely upsetting chapter. Rape is a very frightening thing and it was so upsetting to see Spike runaway from trouble like that. Especially considering what happened to his mother, you think he'd be even MORE determined from stopping a woman being hurt again. I understand that the memories overcame him, but it was still very upsetting to see a poor girl left to victimization from an authority figure like that. So frustrating too! But saying that, I am hooked to your story and I can't wait for more. I don't care if Spike is a fictional character, if he hurts Buffy after what she's been through, I'm ringing his neck! :-)

Author's Response: I'll warn you... the next ten chapters are pretty intense... stick with me and you wont be disappointed! I'm glad you are still with me and are liking it so far!! thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:17 am Title: Fouled

Ooh. Evil villain asserts his presence. I'm very pleased that you went back to the plot development of the story. Poor, damaged Spike and Buffy. Spike for having that auditory trigger taking him back to the murder and Buffy for reliving whatever physical violation/trauma she experienced. Great job in moving the story along.

Author's Response: thanks so much lori! *hugs* Im so glad you like the progression! The next ten chaps are INTENSE! *hugs*

Reviewer: Midnite_Holic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 - 12:45 am Title: Fouled

Oooooooo... Ethan is such a slime covered weasel. I wish Spike had gone in there and punched his face, but his reaction was completely understandable. I am anxious to see how this talk goes between Buffy and Spike. I will keep my fingers crossed that it goes well... Welcome back! Hope Reno was fab-u-lous!

Author's Response: i wish spike punched him too and i wrote it lol. next ten chaps are super intense! *bites nails* hope you like! thanks for the welcome case!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2009 - 10:57 pm Title: Fouled

Coach Rayne is sick! Buffy doesn't need this kind of stress. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: lol more up soon! im glad you are still with me! and yes, rayne is a sicko!

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