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Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2009 - 01:20 am Title: Winning Season

I loved the William awkwardness. It's really too bad that they had to jump each other as soon as the door closed. Don't get me wrong--what you wrote is completely hot and reminiscent of the date on the beach, but more nancy-boy William/sexy-Spike hybrid was needed beyond the condom thing.

Suggestions: when Spike and Buffy go up the stairs, "ascension" would be better with "ascent" and Spike's "feverent" kisses should be "fevered."

Author's Response: Thanks s always! Glad you liked the way it's wrapping up! Will fix

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 11:32 am Title: Winning Season

AWE @ making up :)
And Buffy was right - a good idea or hers to get counseling too. It will help her with the stuff that happened in the past.
Enjoyed the read :) Looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response: Awww thanks Cordy! Glad you like how its ending! *hugs*

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 08:04 am Title: Winning Season

I'm reading this with mixed emotions now, because I don't want this story to end. But this chapter was so sweet, and hot of course, *lol* and I'm really glad they're going to counselling together, it will be good for both of them. Now I'm eager to see what happens in the epilogue. Great update!

Author's Response: lol every god thing must come to an end pet! You can always read it over some time hehe! I'm glad you are enjoying how this story is ending! *hugs*

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 04:49 am Title: Winning Season

That's so sweet! I'm glad they're planning to work on their issues together. Support is so important in situations like theirs. Looking forward to the epilogue!

Author's Response: Aww thanks IT! *hugs* Thanks you so much for reading my fic!

Reviewer: Midnite_Holic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2009 - 02:56 am Title: Winning Season

See, was that so hard? *grins happily* The condom flying off was classic, and then you turned it around and made it hawt with Buffy saving the day! It was perfect! Spike getting two of each college application... awwwwww, how sweet was that?? Oh, and the "Quick" comment - LMAO! I hope the epilogue is a peek into Spuffy college life!

Author's Response: Hehehehe! I'm glad you liked the fluffiness sweetie! Glad we bonded over these fics lol. *hugs*

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