[Report This]Date: 03/25/2009 - 12:04 am Title: Eyes Off the Ball
Ahh...He battles the demons of guilt. Spike has survivor's guilt. Oooh, damaged Spike + damaged Buffy will make for an interesting relationship.
Your protective Xander is a delight to read. I'm glad that he's around without the judgement. I like this Xander a lot.
Author's Response: I can't tell you how much it means that you like my Xander hehehe, he means well, and all he does will make even more sense later on. So it's nice you like him. thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:57 pm Title: Match
Ooh, Spike teaching lessons is always pretty hot, especially on date #1. I'm kinda grateful that I'm not completely caught up with the story because I can keep reading. Something sinister this ways comes. Is it a split personality thing or someone else out there that marked our beautiful boy. He's held up surprisingly well considering it's the anniversary of a paren't's death.
Author's Response: lol yes you are lucky to get 17 chaps in a row lol. Glad you seem to be hooked now *evil laugh* Not a split personality thing in the medical, padded room kinda way lol... but he has issues, and has reason to be strange. Hope you like the progression! More will be up soon! *hug*
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:48 pm Title: Pep Talks
You're being very cryptic with what's happened to Jenny. Is it supposed to be sinister? I'll keep reading. How could Spike go out on a date? I can't see that he would be completely in his right frame of mind. But perhaps that is the point...
Author's Response: I am being cryptic and all will make sense one day lol... Spike's way of dealing now is ignoring, not addressing so a date is the point... takes his mind off it.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:36 pm Title: Defence
Giles and Spike in a playful moment was the highlight of the chapter. That and Spike playing dress up as William.
Author's Response: I am SO glad you liked that little scene hehe *g* it's one of my favs. I can't tell you how much it means that you are enjoying both my fics! New chap of Tears up now! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:30 pm Title: Re- Match
Spike is showing Buffy more of his William side. Loved it! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Awwwww thanks PN! Love you! *hugs* More up soon and I'm so glad you are still liking the fic!
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:26 pm Title: Penalty Shot
Ethan was always a bit dirty. I remembered his conversation in the Halloween episode. Now you've got me wondering what happened in LA to Buffy.
Where's Hank?
Author's Response: lol yeah i always think of ethan as a total pedo. hehe. Glad i have you drawn in *g*. Hank and Joyce are divorced like in canon. He's not around.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:18 pm Title: Scoring
A bit of foreshadowing, I see. Who could possibly coming back, if you've already introduced most of the major players?
On a lighter note, gotta love "sexy kitten eye candy."
Again, "manor" used instead of manner.
Author's Response: Dun dun dah. You will find out my dear. *g* lol glad you are liking everything. Again, thanks for the feedback and corrections, I need them, I'll fix! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:06 pm Title: Settling the Score
I guess the conflagaration had to be quick since you mentioned to buckle down for the angst. Aww, Willow knew Spike from his William days.
I called it wrong. It's Willow for the Xan-man this time around.
Author's Response: lol yeah you called it wrong, but it was a good guess hehehe *g* I hope you keep reading and review and enjoying! thanks.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:00 pm Title: Knowing the Score
Wow. Everything and the kitchen sink. Evil Ethan Rayne, Riley, and Parker? Dare I hope that Faith shows up to deflower Xander or is he cool enough to score with Cordelia/Anya a whole lot sooner than canon.
This is an entertaining read. I am enjoying your Buffy-Spike dynamic. They truly can't help themselves. If I didn't read your summary, I would have no idea that there was something in Spike's deep, dark past.
On to chapter 4...
Author's Response: LOL yeah i like to use canon characters even in tiny small roles. And as for Xander I see you have discovered my plans for him in your next review lol. ;-) Thanks for all the love and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Positions
Interesting build up. "Football" captain Spike makes it clear why Angel and Xander have to play soccer. Interactions between the captain and the soon-to-be student trainer will be fun. I can already picture the innuendo about Spike needing Buffy to work out the "kinks." On to chapter 3...
BTW, hate to nit-pick, but noticed there/their and breath/breathe switches in beginning and when Willow rambles.
Author's Response: Lol... yeah there will be innuendos hehe *g* Thanks for reviewing and I really do appreciate the feedback and corrections... I will fix!
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 10:20 pm Title: Taking the Field
Wasn't too sure about this story based on the summary, but now that I have the time, going to give it a chance. Love your Tears in Heaven and have a feeling that this will be an interesting read. Xander as Buffy's older twin has not been done before in my recollections. On to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Awwwww! Thanks for giving it a chance! I'm so glad you like Tears! I love Xander and Angel being her brothers... makes them a non issue romantically lol. Hope you like the rest! and thanks for reviewing love!
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 09:51 pm Title: Re- Match
omg i love that song its my fav!
makes me smile all the time!
Author's Response: I know I
Author's Response: Don't know what happened to my first response lol. I love that song too... I
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 04:25 am Title: Score Card
Poor, troubled Spike - he really needs to talk this whole thing out. And, poor Giles - he's trying... hopefully Buffy will be able to get through to him. And now I'm dying to know what Spike was working on... you with the evil cliffhangers!!
Author's Response: LOL.... you will find out soon enough. Thanks for the love.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 03:58 am Title: Overtime
Okay... seriously, I can't wait for the real smut in this fic because the little make-out scene was DAMN HOT! That being said - what a fantabulous ending to their night! So very sweet and perfect!
Author's Response: Awwwww thanks Mid! And don't you worry your pretty little head... the smut is on the way! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2009 - 03:55 am Title: Take one for the team
Eeps! I totally missed like 3 updates! omigod! Well, well... good reading for me! I'm so happy to see Spike finally opening up about his past - even if it was a bit snarky. The whole idea of Buffy never actually seeing Spike really smile was actually really sad :( but I am sure you have great things in store for these two!
Author's Response: hehe *g* glad you're getting all caught up! Snarky Spike will continue to open up... and hopefully she'll see him smile more and more! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2009 - 11:08 pm Title: Score Card
Giles is right - if he s still so hurt after all these years it's time to ask for help. William isn't ready for that yet.
Hopefully time will help - in this case, in the form of Buffy.
Author's Response: Yeah... these boys need some serious TLC don't they lol. GLad you liked. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2009 - 11:07 pm Title: Score Card
omg!
write more plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i beg you
Author's Response:
Author's Response: LOL! OK OK! *g* More up... now ;-) thanks
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2009 - 10:22 pm Title: Score Card
Wonder what Spike has planned. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: oh you will NOT be disappointed (if I do say so myself) lol. More up soon!
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2009 - 12:49 pm Title: Score Card
Xander's just annoying. He makes me wanna throw things. *lol* Loved the Spuffyness. As always, can't wait for more of this. :)
Author's Response: You will change your mind about Xan... I promise... he has his reasons for being an ass and he comes around. Thanks for the constant support and feedback. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2009 - 05:49 am Title: Score Card
Poor Spike. He really feels guilty for his mother's death. That is just so sad. I hope Spike and Giles can get through this together. Xander is making me mad though. He needs to just lay off Spike. If Xander continues to pick on Spike then I hope Buffy tells him something. I'm loving the story though and I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked! Don't worry too much about Xander and Spike.... Xan has good reason to be snarky to boyfriend types, all will be revealed. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2009 - 01:40 pm Title: Overtime
Aww they are both just so cute!! :D
Author's Response: thanks Pet! More on the way!
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2009 - 11:05 pm Title: Overtime
Buffy and Spike are too cute for words! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: thanks PN! More on the way!
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2009 - 02:49 pm Title: Overtime
Awe :) (When Buffy imagined Spike as her future boyfriend).
Can't be bad when Spike starts to write music again :) Hopefully he'll start to feel better now.
Author's Response: hehe im glad you liked in cor. More up soon. and as for Spike feeling better... we shall see ;-)
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2009 - 03:26 pm Title: Take one for the team
It sounds as if Buffy's teasing that let to Spike's talking is good for him :)
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: yeah... he just needs a little lovin lol. more soon.
[Report This]Date: 03/19/2009 - 11:31 pm Title: Take one for the team
Spike should losen up and let Buffy know the real him. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Yeah he really should losen up should he! lol *g* More up soon! *hugs* Thanks so much!
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