Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Fourteen
Buffy and Spike, together again. I loved Clem at the beginning, his sensitive skin and wondering when our favorite blonds were going to date again. And Xanders pretty bad horrible-no-good night. Poor him, and still not telling Giles about his relationship with Anya. That's not gonna end well. Well, I hope in some kind of broken English I've been able to convey that I really loved this story, and this was another wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the next update!
Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Fourteen
Whoa-- That last line about knocked the breath out of me! You did a great job of changing the course I was on (I thought it might be Dawn needing some comfort, especially since she had already said goodnight to Spike), without it seeming melodramatic. Although, I should chastize you severely for not filling in the blanks between the goodnight kiss and "come back to bed." Perhaps, if we beg sweetly, you'll catch us up on the sweet and smutty details in the next chapter (which I am praying you'll be posting tomorrow)! Great work-- You are weaving a wonderfully intricate story, which is rich in depth of character.
Date: 04/18/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Fourteen
Whoa! Spike's staying the night?! Yep, Buffy's definitely forgiven him.
Knock Giles over with a feather...
And poor Xander...I had tears welling up. He can be a shmuck, but really...who ever taught him not to be? And he does try so hard to take care of the people he loves, even when he has no clue what the right thing is.
And seriously, Buffy...Clem? The only thing in danger from Clem is kittens. I was hoping Spike suspected Dawn, but I guess we're not there, yet.
Date: 04/18/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Fourteen
What an evil place to stop. ; ) Excellent chapter. Can't wait for more.