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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 03:46 am Title: Eighteen

Well, Dawn certainly is up to something. Interesting chapter. A lot going on, though Anya and Xander trying to talk a bit is of the good. But I wonder about Willow and that demon. Must be more to it than that. And poor, poor Spike, a dead cat never makes a good gift. Can't wait to see what happens. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 01:37 am Title: Eighteen

You don't get nearly enough reviews for this story. It's so good. Every time I see that you updated it, it makes me happy and I drop everything else I was doing to read it. Keep up the good work and please update soon.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 12:15 am Title: Eighteen

Finally...and now he knows. Finally knows that Dawn is that mad at him. And now, Buffy needs to find out.

Leave the crypt, Spike, before that starts doing bad things to you.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: Seventeen

It seemed weird that Giles didn't believe Spike at first about the soul. And I think that it is just wrong to believe that Spike does everything to be more like Angel. Giles should really know better than that. I really want to know what Willow is up to. First with Dawn and now Anya and being upset with Spike. That last one is the most troubling though. We already knew that she was up to something, but I didn't think that she had anything against Spike.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2006 - 04:12 am Title: Seventeen

Well, Willow seems up to no good. Maybe she's in on this cursing him thing, too. Well, I know you'll let us know when you're ready. And Giles and Buffy' and Spikes soul. "Buffy was beginning to chop her hand through the air emphatically, like decisive hand gestures were the key to convincing Giles. Spike was fairly sure they weren’t, but he admired her resolve." Love that bit there. I can practically imagine Spike's face as he thinks such things. Such an amazing chapter, very well setting up more things to come. Fabulous. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2006 - 12:32 am Title: Seventeen

Willow wants Buffy and Spike out of the house? Why? What is she up to?

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Date: 05/02/2006 - 04:42 am Title: Sixteen

Well, she loves him but doesn't believe he loved her... She's not the most observent is she. Oh well, he just about told her about the soul, how long I wonder til she figures it out. And Anya knows about Olivia, and Giles still doesn't know what's going on. That will be an interesting reveal. Marvelous chapter. Please, update soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 04:25 am Title: Fifteen

Great chapter. Love Buffy acknoledging that her and Spike are in a much better place this time around. And Giles sorta letting things with Spike and Buffy be. And Spike's little nod to the whole Anya situation. And poor Dawn. Girl has to learn when something really isn't her fight. And who is saying Hi to her? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 03:04 am Title: Sixteen

God that was an intense chapter. I loved it. By just reading it, all of their emotions became tangible. These very real things that exist not just because you know that they are there, but because you can actually feel them. Seriously, this was an amazing chapter. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 08:41 pm Title: Sixteen

Poor Anya...

And Yes!! About time Spike laid the whole truth out there and doesn't let her get away with her lies and delusions. Go, Spike! You've grown up, baby. Grown as a man, and it was about damn time her little house of cards was shattered to reveal the stark truth.
That bitch - how could she still believe he didn't, couldn't love her after seeing everything he's done for her. She doesn't deserve what she doesn't appreciate, something so beautiful and intense.....

And she's the only Summers' idiot that believes that lie, too. Joyce never did. Dawn never did. They've seen the real Spike, accepted him, and benefitted from giving him that trust, that belief. And if Spike was a lesser man, he would have stalked off already after calling her on her lies and left her miserable in the street, but he kept going with the truth......That's a man any woman could be proud to possess.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: Sixteen

buffy loves him... and still doesn't think he is capable of love?? that's quite sad...
and poor anya! giles goes to her wit a bouquet... and asks her help to decorate a house for hir and his woman?

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 02:20 am Title: Fifteen

I liked knowing Dawn's thoughts. Before she just seemed unreasonably angry. Almost obsessive. I think that she is allowed to be angry, but I'm glad to see that she is starting to break. Still wondering what Willow has planned. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 08:24 pm Title: Fifteen

Is that Willow?

Awww, Buffy and Spike had a regular, good night, and Buffy told Dawn out loud that loves Spike, and Spike should feel pretty content - he got the whole cake.

And Dawn - talk things out, scream, even, but don't keep harboring it inside...Just tell Spike that you're mad and hurt that he left without saying anything to you. And she's infinitely more upset about that then what happened with Buffy in the bathroom.

I feel so bad for Anya! Giles is typically clueless, and she's going to be very hurt when she sees Olivia at Giles' new place. Both Xander and Spike have tried to warn him....poor anya.

Reviewer: Pam S. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Fifteen

Enjoying the story... even though Dawn is still scaring me.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Fourteen

Buffy and Spike, together again. I loved Clem at the beginning, his sensitive skin and wondering when our favorite blonds were going to date again. And Xanders pretty bad horrible-no-good night. Poor him, and still not telling Giles about his relationship with Anya. That's not gonna end well. Well, I hope in some kind of broken English I've been able to convey that I really loved this story, and this was another wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Fourteen

Whoa-- That last line about knocked the breath out of me! You did a great job of changing the course I was on (I thought it might be Dawn needing some comfort, especially since she had already said goodnight to Spike), without it seeming melodramatic. Although, I should chastize you severely for not filling in the blanks between the goodnight kiss and "come back to bed." Perhaps, if we beg sweetly, you'll catch us up on the sweet and smutty details in the next chapter (which I am praying you'll be posting tomorrow)! Great work-- You are weaving a wonderfully intricate story, which is rich in depth of character.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Fourteen

Whoa! Spike's staying the night?! Yep, Buffy's definitely forgiven him.

Knock Giles over with a feather...

And poor Xander...I had tears welling up. He can be a shmuck, but really...who ever taught him not to be? And he does try so hard to take care of the people he loves, even when he has no clue what the right thing is.

And seriously, Buffy...Clem? The only thing in danger from Clem is kittens. I was hoping Spike suspected Dawn, but I guess we're not there, yet.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Fourteen

What an evil place to stop. ; ) Excellent chapter. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 - 03:05 am Title: Thirteen

I have always loved this story. Everything about it really, but this chapter just came out of nowhere. You get home for the day and want to relax and do something you enjoy. For me, it is reading stories like this. Where the author knows what they are talking about, and has put thought into what they are doing. They care about the characters that they write. The author knows what they would do and think because they know them so well. And they have such amazing ways of putting all of that into words. So today I come home, and check for an update for this story. Because that is what this story is to me. A wonderful little break from reality really. And you think you know what to expect. And then I find this chapter. I can't even say what it is that you did differently, but it is like the chapter just hit me upside the head. Like a concentrated happy feeling that I wasn't fully aware of before. I know I'm probably rambling. But I at least wanted to try and tell you how wonderful this chapter was and how much I love this story.

Now for the part where I tell you my favorite parts. ; ) Like when Buffy and Giles are talking, she knows that she can trust Spike because he has always been there for her, and has to remind herself that "not everything was about him." That and the fact that she doesn't even realize it. Then there was Anya and her talk with Xander. This Anya is awesome. Very blunt, and honest, and very perceptive. I used to feel sorry for Xander that she had moved on, but not anymore. She told Xander that she liked being treated with respect even though it was new, and all he thought was that he was done apologizing to her because she didn't understand. And the one thing that is certain in Buffy's life is that she will always be Buffy. He keeps saying that she is not anymore, but it is impossible for her to not be her. All she is doing is living her life for herself now instead of just trying to please her friends. Can't wait for more of this lovely fic. ; )

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 06:29 am Title: Thirteen

Hmmm....Does Spike really know, or has he been lulled into the false sense of thinking his chat with Willow will bring the presents to a stop? I loved how Anya, very patiently, set Xander straight (not that he was really listening). And I absolutely loved the line, "And really, it sounded like something that fruit bat Drusilla would do." I actually LOL at that one. And I think you are oh so clever with Spike's little slip of the mind (that he's only human) to possibly foreshadow the effect of the curse. Great stuff-- keep it coming!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 03:46 am Title: Thirteen

He does does he. Well that's good, I wonder if he's right, of if he's gonna share with her. Or if you're gonna share with us. Sure you are, in due time I'd imagine. Now I'm rambling.

"Or talking to an imaginary Buffy, she’d heard him do that enough times. Imaginary Buffy seemed to like to argue."--Loved this little bit too. Knew he did it, love to think ouf our Buffy listening in on it. Great chapter. So glad Giles seems to have come so some senses and reallized a mistake. Not to mention the whole staying thing. Looking forward to the next updete. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2006 - 01:07 am Title: Thirteen

Hey, a new chapter to me!!!! Yay!

Has he finally figured out that it's done? Really, it makes sense, now that he's seen everybody, or almost everybody. It's easy to narrow down who would be sneaking around and plotting, using the roundabout method, that's pretty childish, when you think about it, to get to him? A teenager with hurt and touchy feelings.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Twelve

I was so hoppeful that Dawn would forgive him. But I guess that it is not going to happen anytime soon. I liked the conversation between Willow and Spike. Great chapter. Loved it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 04:44 am Title: Twelve

Great chapter and excellent interchange between Willow an d Spike. I like that he wears his soul as he used to wear his duster-- very cool. So, I'm wondering, who is turning Spike into a human? Red? And what is Dawn doing-- Working at cross-purposes? Great update. I'm really looking foward to Buffy needing to protect Spike and how her presence physically affects him now that two spells are in effect.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 04:28 am Title: Eleven

What an absolutely delightful chapter! I love your writing style-- the way you allude to things and don't "dumb" things down for the reader. I really enjoyed Anya's and Dawn's internal dialogue, but I think, "don’t lurch around like some great side of beef with two expressions and a martyr complex" is my absolutely favorite new Spike put-down for Angel-- I just about fell-over when I read that. And I like the way Spike was justifying his tears, and his emotions, rather than hating himself for it. I guess you'd get used to your reactions after 126+ years and have to make some kind of piece with it. At any rate, great update, and I'm looking foward to reading more!

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