Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 4
love it!!! keep going...you're doing great!!! can't wait for more... and as in the novel, hard times are awaiting william...poor boy... :( thanx for updating!!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, there'll be some hard times awaiting William.
Date: 01/28/2006 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 4
good update but i wish that snyder wasnt in this story and i wish that william's father didnt die
Author's Response: *lol* Thanks. About Snyder? Well, I couldn't think of anyone I'd hate more for this character, so that's why I chose him. And William's father won't die, but you'll find out what happened to him until later in the story.
Date: 01/27/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm almost dreading to know what's gonna happen next. The talk that William had with his dad went great and now it's all gonna go bad for a while. At least Giles promised that William would always have a home with him. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I promise I'll try to make my best not to draw the angst too much. :)
Date: 01/27/2006 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
More please......very interesting turn me want more.....
Author's Response: *lol* Thank you! I just posted more. ;)
Date: 01/27/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. I liked the father/son bonding between William and Rodrigo. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! I'll try to update soon. :)