Date: 01/29/2006 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter 5
I like how the plot is progressing. I'm glad William's father is still alive out there somewhere. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, cariño. I'm glad you're liking it so far.
Date: 01/28/2006 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh I hope the Don kicks some ass.........will take awhile I'm sure......but I hope he comes back from whatever plan you have for him and gets to kill both of them..........
Author's Response: Oh, I really think he will kick some ass, eventually. Thank you!
Date: 01/28/2006 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Even though I know where the story is going and what might be happening I'm still extreamly intrigued by it. Love the way you're writing it.
Author's Response: *blushes* I'm glad you're liking the way I'm writing the story and even more that you're intrigued, even if you know what could happen. Thank you!
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
i wish that we could get rid of darla and snyder
Author's Response: We would get rid of them, just not for the moment since I need them for the story. ;)
Date: 01/28/2006 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
eeep the plot thickens...though i can't rightly remember if in the original story "darla" was so evil...i remember that her character loved "rodrigo" very much...but i may have been mistaken... anyhow... great update!! thanx so much!!!
Author's Response: Mmm, maybe she wasn't that evil, but she wasn't precisely in love witn Rodrigo either, in my opinion at least. ;) Thanks for your comment. .