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Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 16

It came to my mind that in this story, the 2 people who are engaged in a marriage decided not by themselves but by their mothers, a marriage of reason in fact, are the 2 people who are the most determinated to have a marriage of love. Elizabeth felt in love with Angel, or rather the picture she and her mother had made of him. And Angel wants to marry Aimée because he felt in love with her at their first meeting (romantic, yes, but not very clever). And the 2 people who are free of their choices, want to make a marriage of reason, so to say. Aimée wants to be Angel's wife, not because she loves him, but for his name, his money, his rank (and for the little revenge on Elizabeth of course). William is not in love with Aimée but wants to marry her because he likes her, she's beautiful, and born in a good family. It seems to me he wants to establish himself, have a family, and he sees Aimée as a good choice. He seems to think that "she seemed not to care if he came from a good family, or even had a family" and because of that, she really cares for him. Yes, my boy, she cares for you, a lot, but not for the thing you think... (not very clever n° 2). The 2 brothers De Alcazar have a problem with women. Is it genetic? Let's hope they will open their eyes soon! I agree with the last review: Aimée deserves an Oscar AND a Golden Globe! I can't wait the next chapter :)!

Author's Response: Hee! Well, I think that's a very good analysis of the story. ;) And you're very right on your assessments. *lol* Not sure if it's genetic, but don't worry, they'll soon realize who Aimée really is. ;)

I'm glad you think so, I had fun writing her on this chapter. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 16

Seems that Elizabeth drives men away to her sister now that Angel and Spike have decided that Aimee is more their type of woman.

I really feel sorry for Elizabeth because as gentile as she is, she really doesn't fight for what she wants. Perhaps the sheltered life she lead has crippled her spirit and makes her less appealing to the opposite sex.

I would love it if another man would take an interest in Elizabeth to bring out her feminine wiles. Someone more affluent or richer than Angel or Spike. A character like Riley? Perhaps. I just want her to have one male suitor...darn it!

Author's Response: Well, don't worry, Elizabeth will develop more of a backbone on the next chapters and will begin to fight back. ;) And as you'll begin noticing on the next chapter, she's not that unappealing to William.

And don't worry, there'll be someone that will bring Elizabeth out of the protective shell she's been living in and it might be sooner than you all might think.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:17 am Title: Chapter 16

It's good to know William's first meeting with Elizabeth left such a lasting impression on him. Aimee should win an award for that performance she put on for Angel. Great chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked. :D Thank you so much!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 06:33 am Title: Chapter 16

good update

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter 16

So William's in love with Elizabeth, or getting there anyways. Love how the story's turning out. Can't wait for their next meeting. And soon revenge against Snyder.. *evil grin* ;) Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I think he'll get there sooner than he thinks he will. ;) I'm glad you're liking how it is turning out, I'm having fun writing the story. I hope to update very soon. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter 16

The plot thickens. Hopefully, Mr. Rhodes is not lying to William. So Spike has Aimee & Faith (well anyway, Faith is in love with him). Glad he couldn't get Elizabeth off his mind. We can't let her go back to the convent tomorrow can we? You know best .

Author's Response: Hee, and it will thicken even more soon. ;) And we'll see what happens to Elizabeth soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter 16

ooooooo.....William can't get Buffy out of his mind... *big smile*

Ya know..I get that Aimee is just an ass..but why is she so set on making sure that Buffy gets hurt? Just jealousy? William and Elizabeth meet again next chapter! I am really looking forward to it!

Author's Response: Hee! Nope, he can't. *big smile*

You'll find out more about Aimée on the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing!

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