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Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2006 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 20

Better and better :)! I like the way you depict their awakening to... reality ;)! They feel, yes, but not only. Hormones + brain, so to say... In the last chapter (I have to admit I read it again... and again), William became (at last!) reasonable "How could he ever think that he could settle for less than what this girl made him feel". And Elizabeth is on the way of salvation (Bye bye convent!). And when she lets William removes her veil and coif: very symbolic ;)! Angel is far, very far from salvation. Nearer to Aimée, further from salvation. But I have to admit he has guts: "So let them talk" as he says. Darla, shell-shocked Darla: the beginning of the end for Lady De Alcazar? Sweet justice ;)!

Author's Response: *lol* I'm glad you liked all that. I think you'll enjoy what awaits Darla and Aimée in further chapters. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter 20

Wooha! Darla's taking orders from Angel. Loved the Spuffy. They are so meant for each other. You are so good. Bless that muse. Let's keep her all fired up.

Author's Response: *lol* I told you all that Darla was going to pay. ;) I'm glad you liked the Spuffy, I just posted some more of it. *winks* Heh, and yes, after the little break, she seems to be all fired up again. Thanks so much for commenting!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 20

Doing a happy dance now!!!!

"Whatever it was, it didn’t matter, at least not to him, not anymore. He’d decided that she was going to be his wife and God help anyone that tried to interfere with his plans."

Take that Aimee'! Ha.. Now we just gotta get Buffy to cooperate..and..I am thinking that Darla is going to be a bit deperate to stop Snyder from talking. What chain reaction this is going to cause and who it will affect will be interesting to see. BTW..So glad Buffy let William see her hair! Shows that there is hope that he will break down her defenses.. Great update : D



Author's Response: Heh! *dances along with you* I'm glad you liked that! ;) *lol* And Buffy is cooperating quite well I think. ;) Oh, the chain reaction is coming very soon. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 09:23 am Title: Chapter 20

Oh so very touching and tender between William and Buffy, we know what passion will lie between our two. Final vows ?? I think not. And as for Darla, I can hardly wait to see how she handles Synder, and what Aimee does when she finds out what Buffy has been doing, or actually kissing.........anyway great chapter, and as usual I ask for more and thanks

Author's Response: *lol* Yeah, I don't think she's thinking of taking those vows anymore. ;) Heh, Darla and Snyder's conversation is something I'm looking forward to writing. And Aimée won't find out, yet. Thank you so much for commenting. :D

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 07:28 am Title: Chapter 20

I hope you haven't changed your direction too much because it was a wonderful story from the beginning. I cannot wait to see what happens next. It was very romantic how he asks to see her hair and they kiss again.

Author's Response: *lol* No, I think my muse and I finally reached an agreement and although there will be a few things that will change, the story itself will still be basically the same I outlined at first. I'm glad you liked that part. Thank you so much for your kind words!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 06:38 am Title: Chapter 20

I'm really liking Angel in this story so far. He seems like a guy who really wants to do some good in his life. I just hope the relationship between the brothers only gets better with time.

I bet Snyder's gonna be pissed to find out that Angel plans to replace him, I still think he should fall off a horse.

I can't wait till Spike becomes the Administrator of Campo Real, and to see how much things really start to change.

It seems that it really is love at first kiss for Buffy and Spike. He's already decided that she was going to be his wife, and she's thisclose to forgetting *completely* about her life in a convent.

Remind me to send your muse chocolates and roses because I love her tons right now lol... and kuddos to your beta for the awesomely quick beta'ing job.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Heh, I loved writing him in that scene. I'm glad you liked him, too.

Oh, Snyder is going to be beyond pissed. And not yet. ;)

Hopefully, *crosses fingers* he'll be back to take his post in Campo Real in chapter 24 or so. We'll see. A lot will be happening then.

Heh, yeah, I guess it was love at first kiss. ;)

My muse says thank you so much for the chocolates and roses and she hopes you like the Spuffy interlude. ;) Yep, my betas are awesome. :D

Thanks so much for commenting and next chapter is up. :D

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter 20

I just love how William and Elizabeth's lovestory is playing out. The scene between them in this chapter was so romantic. I also really enjoyed reading Elizabeth and William's thoughts.
Wow! So many exciting plot developments are gonna happen at Campo Real in three months. Great conversation between Angel and Darla, love how he dropped the William hiring and the Synder firing on Darla. Excellent update! =)

Author's Response: I'm very glad you're liking their lovestory, I'm loving writing it. :D

Yeah, from chapter 22 on, the story will have a lot of twists and will be very plot heavy. I loved writing Angel like that, it was nice to surprise Darla with it, too. ;)
Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 06:32 am Title: Chapter 20

Glad that Elizabeth is allowing Spike some time to decide what she is feeling. Seems like her limited experiences in romance had her living in a fantasy world with the perfect man in "Angel". Now that reality has shaken her and wiped away silly young girl dreams, the woman in her will spark to life and seize the opportunity to find love.

Angel in the meantime is also leaving his boyhood world and taking on the responsibilities of a man. Taking charge away from his mother and Snyder will certainly rattle everyone's comfort zone and with William coming back, who knows what will happen next. That is why I really like your story, I can't wait to see where you'll take us. Great chapter.


Author's Response: Yep, that's my muse's evil plan for Elizabeth as you'll notice in the new chapter. ;)

I can just say things are going to get very plot heavy once the action is moved to Campo Real.
I'm very happy to know you're liking the story. Thank you so much. :D

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter 20

LOVED IT

Author's Response: I'm glad! Thank you!

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 04:57 am Title: Chapter 20

great chapter. I really, really love your writing style and the way you depict your characters. It's incredible. And it's so ironic that Aimee's name means love when it seems to be everything that she ... isn't. can't wait to see what happens. hm, it'd be nice if Aimee got a taste of how it felt to be completely heartbroken and gets her own little game turned around on her.... but then again... that's just me. oh... here's me being ignorant, but why is Buffy offended when he calls her 'santa elizabeth'?

Author's Response: Thank you very much, *blushes* that's very kind of you.
*lol* I know, it's really ironic, but I wanted to keep the original name from the story, since I do like it. So much so, that one of my daughters is named Aimée. Oh, Aimée's downfall is coming, but she will still create lots of problems for everyone... And no, that's not just you. ;) ...Buffy is offended because she thinks he uses that name to make fun of her and her vocation. Which is partly truth, but he also uses it because he likes to see her mad and then because he's used to call her that, so it's kind of automatic.

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