[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 32
Oh crap. NO!!!!
Author's Response: *wide evil grin* It will be better soon. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 32
Very cool. I´m happy that you put this part like que original. Nothing funny without William running to Campo Real for losing his fiancee. I really like that part. Oh, did you read the books? I´m reading they now, very romantic e much more angst than the novel. I hope my awful english don´t kill anyone. Write more fast, please.
Kiss
Author's Response: *lol* I just couldn't resist. It was too good not to use it, I just twisted things a bit so they would fit into my plot. I think I saw them online somewhere, but I haven't really had much time to read them. I should try soon, though, I'm sure they're awesome since Caridad Bravo Adams is an amazing writer. And your English isn't awful, I promise. I hope to post another chapter tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/11/2006 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter 32
So what contraption and vial did Aimee receive? Is it something to make Angel bigger to not notice her lack of purity? Also with Riley sniffing around Buffy, will William think that she is playing the field while he was gone? Only you know the ansers, it is for me to wait and find out when you update next. Good chapter, excellent reading.
Author's Response: Hee, you'll find out the answers to your questions on the next 2 or 3 chapters, cariño. ;) I'll try to update tomorrow or as soon as I get the beta'd chapter back from my beta. Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2006 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 32
Awww..Poor Spike. I am glad his first thought was there had to be some mistake even if on it's heels was a bit of panic. I imagine that the misunderstanding will be quickly cleared up..( I hope : )
Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeves next..How this unfolds from here on out should be pretty interesting! Thanks for another update : D
Author's Response: *lol* Well, I'll just say that that misunderstanding will be quickly cleared up. ;)Hee, you'll find out soon enough what I have up my sleeves, seems muse is playing nice again and I'll be able to post tomorrow or wednesday, depending on when I get the chapter back from my beta. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2006 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter 32
No. NO!
*cries* Please, please say Spike will run off to campo real or giles will catch up!
Author's Response: Spike will run off to Campo Real. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2006 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter 32
What has he done indeed…
It seems our favorite couple has another obstacle to face. Hope everything gets cleared up nice and proper.
Wonder what Darla is going to say when her husband’s son shows up at Campo Real especially when she finds out that he’s the new administrator :)
I can’t help but to feel bad for Angel. I just hope that when he finally finds out what kind of woman Aimée really is, he’s not in too deep to let her go.
Author's Response: lol
Oh, everything will get cleared up, at least sort of, soon. ;)Oh, Darla's reaction is going to be very interesting and is probably coming on chapter 34, if characters behave and don't try to derail me away too much from the plot. Angel, well, he will find out...eventually. And it won't be pretty. Thanks for reviewing, cariño!
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2006 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 32
Oh Giles, I think you just added some fuel to the fire that will ignite bitch sister's demise.........YAHOO!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for her, then Darla to be taken down......and the REAL Daddy I'm sure will be making an unexpected appearance in the near fututre...........feel sorry for GIles, for he would've made William a fine father figure and doted on him as if they were blood related.......
I hope bitch bride gets the night she never will forget, LOL, and not with fine memories to warm her when she thinks back on it, LOL......and I can't wait for her to find out that in the end......Buffy is the princess bride and Queen of the manor.......
Kimber
Author's Response: *lol* He certainly did, as his intervention accelerated some events. ;) And you got the order right! ... And real daddy is returning soon. Doesn't mean that Giles won't still be another father figure for William though. ;)Oh, you'll find out about Aimée and her wedding night very soon. ;) ... and the time when Aimée learns who William really is, is coming very soon. Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2006 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 32
Oh bring it on...cant wait for Willaim to arrive...things are really hotting up...please update soon and put us all out of our misery!!
Author's Response: Hee, it's coming soon, very soon. ;) I'll update as soon as I get the chapter back from my beta. :) Thanks for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 32
Wow! Spike's arrival at Campo Real is really gonna rock everyone's world. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to him and how he reacts to them. Hmmm... I can't help but wonder if Darla is gonna find the mysterious vial or the contraption Aimée is hiding. Fantastic chapter as always!
Author's Response: Oh, yes, it certainly will rock everyone's world. It will create a very interesting chain-reaction, I think. You'll find out about that in chapter 33. Thanks so much for your comment, Cariño!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 32
I just knew that invitation thing was gonna come back to haunt them!
You're a great writer.
Please update soon, i can't wait to read bout Spike's 'adventure' in Campo Real.
Mel
Author's Response: *lol* Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, Mel. :)
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2006 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 32
"Oh, dear Lord, what have I done?”
OH YES GILES! I wouldn't have been able myself to say better ;) !
So, we have our William on the edge of the crisis. No doubt the way to Campos Real and Buffy will seem very long to him. Make sure that our friend will be soon reassured;)...
But I feel the 2 lovers William and Buffy will meet a difficult time. Some things will have to be told, some difficult truths revealed. After 3 months of separation, another test to be faced. But I have like an idea that William and Buffy are strong enough to succeed ;).
Little Aimée... Bad time goes on for her. I remember a proverb: "If Gods want to punish you, they fulfill your dearest wish", something like that.
She is so sure to have had the perfect revenge on Buffy, thinking: "she had everything her sister ever wanted and she wasn’t about to give that up, no matter what she had to do". How ironic that it's absolutely not the case. The day she will understand that, that she married Angel, and refused William, all that for nothing, I have to say it, I will feel some sadness for her...
I can understand Aimée's bitterness, feeling herself always second after Elizabeth. But I wonder if it was the reality, was she really " the spare, disposable daughter, the one whose existence didn’t matter" in the past? A confrontation between Aimée and Joyce would be interesting...
Well :) a great chapter and as you say "Let the games begin!".
No need to say I can't wait the next chapter. I feel like a mosquito who drank 8 cups of coffee ;)!
Author's Response: Hee! Poor Giles, he was sickly, it wasn't really his fault. ;)Oh, Spike will be reassured soon enough, don't worry. ;)And you're very perceptive and that's all I say about William and Buffy. ;) Hee, that proverb seems to fit Aimée perfectly and the day you will feel some sadness for her is coming, very soon. ;)And again I say you're very perceptive and there'll probably be a confrontation between Buffy and Aimée about that. lol, you're too sweet, thank you so much for your review!
*hugs* Mari
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 32
Oh, now this chapter was just way too short. I can see you leave us hanging about William, but so wanted to know about the wedding night. You know, with Tegua''s remedy. I'm going to be on pins and needles until the next update. I hope your muse gets all fired up and compelled to write an update really soon. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hee! Sorry it was short, but I'll make up for that with the next chapter. ;) And to tell you the truth, I never intended to write about the wedding night. I'm going to write about the aftermath of the wedding night though and then you'll find out all about Tegua's remedy. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing. :D
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2006 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 32
Oh lordy that's just hilarious - in an 'ok I know it's not SUPPOSED to be funny but COME ON' kind of way. I can't wait to see what happens next update.
Author's Response: *lol* I'm glad you thought so. :D I was thinking the same while I was writing it. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 32
Hmm I can't say I didn't see that one coming. The misunderstadning is always a key ingredient it would seem :)
Author's Response: Yes, it is, and it's not like I haven't been hinting at it for a while now. ;) Thanks for reviewing. :D
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2006 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 32
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hee! Hope to have it ready soon. Thanks for reviewing!
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