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Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 33

The suspense is killing me. I'm so happy I have two more chapters to go :)

Author's Response: Hee, I created suspense, yay! :D

Reviewer: Zari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2006 - 06:09 am Title: Chapter 33

I LOVE IT!!! that was amazing!!! you're an extremely good writer. i can't wait for the next part. i know it'll be totally worth the wait.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm very glad you're loving the story. :D

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 33

Little Aimée is so incredible ;)!

To be so sure that William came to Campo Real to steal her from Angel?

AAARRFFF :) ! Little girl has read too many fairy tales...

But let's recognize that after a such wedding night, Little Aimée has excuses to have such hopes.

At least, her first time with William was a good experience. Despite all the problems she met because of that. But sure that for her, her second time will stay as unforgettable as her first time, but definitively not for the same reasons...

Well, William plays lucky/unlucky here: yes his beloved Buffy is always single :), but she finds him with Aimée. Rather with Aimée all over him :(.

And Angel who cames precisely at this moment!

Drama and funny in the same time: Queen of cliffhangers you are! No need to say I wonder what William will do with Buffy, and Aimée... and Angel!

So strange that Buffy and Aimée think that each one is always second after the other. Aimée had always thought that she was second after Buffy for their family. And Buffy that she is always second after Aimée concerning men. Sisters...

Perfect job :)!

Author's Response: *lol* I guess Aimée prefers to live in her own fantasy world where everyone bows to her every whim. Not for long though. ;)

I think you're right, she won't be able to forget neither one of those experiences.

*lol* Sorry for the cliffhangers, but this portion of the story just begs for them. ;)

You'll find out soon enough what William will do with Buffy, and Aimée...and Angel! *weg*

Hmm, you know I hadn't noticed that about Aimée and Buffy and feeling like they're second best concerning the other, until you pointed it out. But yes, I agree with you.

Thanks for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 33

Is it wrong that I feel giddy that Aimée isn’t all that happy with Angel’s performance? lol… yet she’s still as stubborn as ever. It’s too bad she’ll realize too late that everything she went through really wasn’t worth it.
I said it before, Darla’s looking out, well, mostly for herself, but for her son too, and this is one time I’m totally with her on her plans, lol…
I kinda wish Angel would of stayed in the house, so it would be Aimée explaining to her sister why she was hugging Spike, and maybe in the process make a fool of herself but since that’s not the case, I’m just left to wonder what explanation she is going to give to her sister and husband, and what will Spike tell Buffy to make her see, he was there for her.
I also wonder what Angel’s gonna say to Spike and Buffy getting married when he seemed so set on marrying her to Riley.
I really can’t wait till the next chapter and for the story to continue :D

Author's Response: *lol* I guess considering how Aimée has behaved throughout the story, I would have been worried if you hadn't felt giddy. ;) ...Yes, she's quite stubborn, you have no idea how much, yet.

I agree with you about Darla, at least up to this point. ;)

Oh, don't worry, that conversation between Aimée and Buffy will happen very soon.

Angel, well, I think he won't have any say in Spike and Buffy's marriage once some things come to light.

Next chapter is up and just in time for your birthday, I know it's tomorrow, but I'm not sure if I'll have much time for anything then.
Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 33

June 20th is perfectly fine by me, that means it's only four days till Spike's "explanation" and Aimee's messing up said explanation. Fabulous chapter,

Author's Response: *lol* For Aimée trying to mess up the explanation, you'll have to wait a little bit. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Amelia-Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter 33

Wow! What an exciting chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I loved reading Spike's thoughts throughout the chapter, I especially the liked the little prayer he made. I am so loving the fact that Darla found out about Aimée's deception. Wonderful chapter! ~ I just finished listening to the song and I really enjoyed it, I found it to be very romantic. :D

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you found it exciting and that you liked reading his thoughts and the prayer. :D
Darla is going to be a powerful enemy against Aimée. It will be a battle of wills for them.
I'm ecstatic that you liked the song, it's been a favorite of mine for years. :D
Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 09:10 am Title: Chapter 33

okay very intense and I hope buffy will listen to Willaim and not draw too many conclusions. So Aimee wants an affair..........I hope buffy tells him everything and he knows what a liar aimee is. Angel probably will not suspect anything amiss.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and you'll find out very soon what Buffy will do. ;)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 33

Hmm a little short and the misunderstandings just keep on coming :)

Author's Response: *lol* Hee, misunderstandings are key for this story, so they'll just keep on coming! :) Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter 33

Well looks like something nasty is getting ready to hit the fan..So now the miscommunication about Buffy has been cleared up.. but Buffy now thinks that Spike is there for Aimee'! Argg...I hope that is cleared up just as quickly..You can't blame Buffy for being a bit jealous, since she knows what happened between Aimee' and William..

Darla has some interesting info on Aimee's deceptions..Can't help but wonder what Angel is going to do when confronted..hmm..

Thanks for the translation of the Soap Opera theme song..I love how dramatic soap songs are...they crack me up! Looking forward to your next update : D

Author's Response: Hee, that particular misunderstanding will be cleared up soon, no worries. But there will be others that will surface soon. ;)

Oh, Angel's reaction will be a sight to behold.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 33

Oh the wicked slut sister had better be put in her place and good, LOL, ......Man this is one time I want Darla to be bad and make it good.......I feel for Angel, to find that the woman he thinks he loves was once his brother's bed companion, and is the true heir.....and that he is in fact the bastard son, so much heartache coming his way......I pray that Buffy has more faith then she knows in how much William/Spike loves her and can see the truth of what has happened.......and that God has listened to William's prayers......

Author's Response: Oh, don't you worry, when Darla decides to talk she will make it very good. ;)... About Angel, well, it won't be easy for him to face all that's coming and that's all I'll say about that...hee, you'll find out about Spike and Buffy in the next chapter. :D Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 33

Was it the custom at that time for the mother-in-law to check for virginity? Oh, and Aimee hanging on Spike. Grrrrr. Poor Buffy. Can't blame her for being upset. I hope William gets a chance to tell her the truth. What will Angel think. Did he see Aimee clinging to William? Wonder if Darla will spring the surprise on Angel the same day. For heaven's sake. I just thought. Don't want anything to ruin the relationship between William and Angel. What can I bribe your muse with to spped up things? Just love this story.

Author's Response: I think it was customary sometime that there had to be some proof that the girl was a virgin. It wasn't done exactly as I portrayed here, but I thought it will be another way of humiliating Aimée. I really don't think Darla will tell Angel so soon, she wants to savor the moment when Aimée falls from the grace of him and everyone else and the longer she waits the harder Aimée will fall. ;) Hmm, sorry I can't reassure you much regarding William and Angel, because it won't be easy for Angel to accept that his brother was his wife's first.

What can you bribe her with? *lol* At the moment, we just need more time to write, as soon as things slow down here I hope to go back to posting al least twice a week. Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter 33

Wow! This chapter really had so much in it that I demands a second read. I really enjoyed all the sequence of events going on here.

Aimee always hurting Buffy demands that she suffer for all the pain she has inflicted upon her sister.

Dona Darla also needs a comeuppance and she is not without her secrets herself.

I cannot imagine what the next chapter will hold because Buffy may be angry and hurt enough to not trust Spike. Though Angel wondering why his wife is throwing herself at another man would be intresting to see.

Loved reading the lyrics, thanks for sharing them.

Author's Response: Hee, yeah, I know it had quite a bit in it, but I needed to move the plot along. ;)

Aimée and Darla will get their comeuppance very soon.

Hope you like what happens in the next chapter and I'm very glad you liked the lyrics. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter 33

It appears that the sh_t is going to hit the fan, more than one fan if fact. The next chapter it seems is going to bring on some nasties for Aimee, I believe the saying goes "payback is a bitch", but then so is Aimee. You do realize we are all waiting now with baited breath !! I can only hope that our sweet Buffy will listen to William, and she (Buffy) can be the smug one with her sister. Very tantalizing chapter, great job and thanks

Author's Response: *lol* You might be right about that, but not yet. There are a few things that have to happen before that. And you'll read more of Buffy's reaction on chapter 34. ;) Thanks so much for commenting!

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter 33

The cliffhanger is evil :-) Great story so far.

Author's Response: Hee! Sorry for that, but I couldn't help myself. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

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