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Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 32

Oh crap. NO!!!!

Author's Response: *wide evil grin* It will be better soon. ;)

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 31

Ha ha, is it wrong that I take pleasure in Aimee's pain?

Author's Response: Nope, I don't think it is. ;)

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 30

Good questions, all, Spike!

Author's Response: Hee, hope the answers are as good. ;)

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oh boy, seems things are conspiring against them

Author's Response: Yep, many things conspiring, but many things in their favor, too. ;)

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 28

Ha ha, so much fun to see Aimee get hers.

Author's Response: Glad to read you enjoyed that. ;)

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 27

Parting is such sweet sorrow...:(

Author's Response: Yes, it is, but it needed to be done. :(

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 26

LOL Poor Spike. The guy can't catch a break lol. That was a great scene. Aimee it seems is starting to atone...against her will of course lol.

Author's Response: Yep, poor Spikey, and he still has to go through quite a lot. *lol* Yeah, very against her will, but I don't think she really has a saying here. Thanks!

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 25

Maria kind of reminds me of the nurse is Romeo and Juliet. Hopefully, she's just as helpful in this case :)

Author's Response: Hee! MarzBar told me the same thing about María. And she definitely will be very helpful. :D Thanks!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 24

Spuffy is getting heated lol! Woo hoo! And that Aimee...can't wait for all her sins to catch up with her.

Author's Response: Hee, yes, not too heated though, yet. ;) Oh, Aimée's sins are catching up with her very soon. Thank you!

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 23

Such a sweet meeting with Spuffy. And such a romantic proposal. Love Buffy in this :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it sweet and romantic, that was the idea. ;) Thanks!

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh, I do not trust Aimee at all! That little...lol. How sweet that Spike ran all the way to see Buffy...awww....:)

Author's Response: Oh, you do very well by not trusting Aimée. ;) Hee, thank you so much for reviewing!

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Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 21

Playing catch up. Such a romantic chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie. I'm glad you think so. :D Welcome back!

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Date: 07/15/2006 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 35

Well, slowly but surely ;)...

So Buffy is determined to help Willliam to be recognized in his rights as son of Don Rodrigo De Alcazar. To listen to her, it seems so easy. I fear our girl sees soon the task will be... difficult?

Aunt Darla, to begin with... A great problem. She is not precisely happy with the fact that William is the new administrator. I doubt she would jump of joy to call him "stepson"...

Angel... Difficult to say... He may be happy to learn that William and him are brothers. But learning that William is the real heir of their father? Wait and see...

Joyce. Mommy dearest. Desperatly attached to the Agreements (with a big "A") . Even if William is definitively recognized as legitimate son of Rodrigo, Joyce can perfectly keep on seeing him only as a bastard. And married with her daughter? Mommy dearest would not be so happy.

It will be hard to wait til the next chapter ;)!

Little Aimée seems to have big problems herself, too big for this little head... But it doesn't mean she can't cause big problems to other people.

I see a big dark cloud upon our William and Buffy... Little Aimée, yes, but big shadow...

I also see another cloud, THE explanation to William about the past engagement between Buffy and Angel... Ouch...

Tempest? Storm? Hurricane? That's the question.

What can I say? I can't wait the next chapter :)!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, Buffy is very determined to help him be recognized as a De Alcazar, and even if it might look difficult, it might be easier than they all expect. ;) *hint hint*

Yep, Darla can be a problem, but there are some situations that might ease her into an accepting mood.

You'll find out very soon of Angel's reaction to William being his brother. He won't find out he's the heir yet, though, not until don Rodrigo gets back into the picture. ;)

Joyce, you're so very right about her. ;) Although it won't be her decision to make, not really.

Little Aimée's problems are just starting, she is going to have more in her plate than she'd ever be able to handle, but as you say she will still cause problems to others.

And you're so very right over the big dark Aimée-shaped cloud. ;)

That other cloud won't come into play until after Buffy and Spike get married, though. *more hints*

Tempest, storm, hurricane? Maybe all of the above? *wide evil grin*

Thank you so much for reviewing, sorry for the delay in answering and posting. *hugs*

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Date: 07/06/2006 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter 35

heh..heh..heh.

Author's Response: *lol* Thanks, I think. ;)

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Date: 07/06/2006 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter 35

Awww... what a sweet reunion Spike and Buffy are having, I just loved their conversation. Buffy is right, Joyce probably will see the resemblance between Spike and his father immediately, the upcoming confrontation is gonna be amazing. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much, darling! The upcoming confrontation is coming soon to an archive near you, we just have to get some things out of the way and hopefully it will be in chapter 37. Thanks again and sorry for the delay in posting and in answering your review. *hugs*

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 35

I liked Buffy and Spike's talk. Buffy's optimism is refreshing, but Spike is right on the money where Darla is concerned. I'm really looking forward to the fireworks when Buffy and Spike announce their engagement. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: You're very right about Darla, but she might not have much of a say in this or how it will play. *hint hint* *lol* And fireworks are coming in about 2 or 3 chapters, maybe? Thanks for reviewing and sorry for my delay in answering.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 08:24 am Title: Chapter 35

what is Aimee up to! It can never by anything good............How will William break the news. I hope that it is Joyce that notices the resemblance. Looking forward to another chapter.

Author's Response: That's the million dollar question! Hee, and yes, she's never up to anything good. ... Oh, don't worry, anyone that knew Rodrigo will recognize William as soon as he sees him. ;)

Thanks for your review and sorry for taking so long in answering it. *hugs*

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter 35

Whew...EVERYONE has got an agenda! lol I am getting a bit nervous about everyone's reaction to Spike and Buffy's plans to marry. Now I am wondering about everyone's reaction to who Spike really is..

BTW...Buffy is a sharp little thing! Nice to be reminded of that..Not quite the dumb nun sister that everyone wants to make her out to be.. Looking forward to more : )

Author's Response: *lol* Yes, everyone has an agenda! Don't worry, they won't find out about them getting married until a bit later in the story (not much) but we're going one shock at a time. ;)

*lol over Buffy* Yeah, she definitely isn't dumb at all and she's much more stronger than she appears to be, too.

Thank you so much for your review and sorry for the lack of updates and for taking so long in answering your review. *hugs*

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter 35

Loved the update. Gotta love maria. Just love the way things are evolving so far. I'm sure we all understand about RL. Or we should. You are writing this for our reading pleasure. Is there anything I can do for your muse? I absolutely love this story. Thanks again for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you love María because you'll be seeing a whole lot more of her soon. Sorry for the long wait, but I think my muse finally decided to come back from vacation. *crosses fingers*

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 35

Great update! Love that the plot is thickening!

Author's Response: Hee, yes, it sure is thickening. Thank you!

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Date: 06/28/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 34

A little moment of peace, I am sooo relieved that William and Buffy have made the things clear :)

A little moment of peace, after a tempest, but before a storm?

Little Aimée gets a lot of surprises here... learning that William is Angel's friend and the new administrator of Campo Real !

I would be not surprised if the girl, after her "faint", begins to make plans, thinking of how it would be easy to have an affair with William, who is now litterally in the place, near her.

William is right to see how Aimée could be dangerous. A good reason for him to tell Buffy all the truth about his affair with Aimée, before the girl could do it.

I wonder how William will react, learning that Buffy was supposed to marry Angel. Hope that our boy will not have crazy ideas in mind, as Buffy not loving him really, and being with him only to search some comfort. William is clever than that, isn't he ;)? And not blind, too, like some half brother we all known...

I can wait the next chapter... The face of Darla in front of William... The face of "Mommy Dearest" Joyce too, (life is made of little pleasures). And I have almost forgotten: the face of Snyder :)!

Thanks :)!



Author's Response: *lol* Yes, they made some things clear, but there are still some that they hadn't addressed, yet. *weg*

Hee, you are too clever, my dear. ;)

Oh, Aimée's surprises are just beginning. And yeah, she might make plans, but that doesn't mean that they'll come to fruition. ;)

Oh, yep, I agree, he should tell Buffy, but we'll see what he decides very soon.

Oh, William, William, he is very clever for some things and then he lets jealousy gets in the way of the things he knows. *hint hint* ;)

I hope you like Darla and Joyce's reaction (and maybe even Snyder's) to William's reappearance in chapter 36.

Thank you for your review, cariño!

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Date: 06/22/2006 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter 34

Quite the little actress she is, isn't she? It's too bad Aimée's little show is coming close to an end, lol...
So glad Buffy believed Spike and how could she not? After those reasons, even I would, lol :P
I think, even though it'd probably hurt Buffy, that he needs to come out and tell her everything that happened between him and Aimée, because they need all the trust and faith in each other if they're to get through everything that will be against them.
Can't wait till William becomes a Giles' and they can ask Joyce for Buffy's hand in marriage. Great update, want more. Please?

Author's Response: Hee! Yes, she is. And you're right about that, her little show is coming close to an end, not that she won't keep creating havoc when it does. ;)
*lol* I'm glad you would, too. I was afraid I had gone a little too far with those reasons. :D
Oh, I think so, too, but I have plans for how Buffy is going to find out. ;)
You won't have to wait for too long for them to marry, maybe 2 or 3 more chapter.

And more to come this week, hopefully by Tuesday or Wednesday. Thank you so much for reviewing, I'm very glad you liked this chapter!

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Date: 06/22/2006 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 34

very cool chapter and I hope the revelations do not stop there..........spike needs to tell her everything about Aimee because she is not going away...............

Author's Response: Oh, you're very right, she's not going away...yet. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 06/21/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 34

That paragraph where Spike was giving Buffy reasons for her to trust him.......*sigh* No way she could turn away from that!

Aimee' is evil..but she's also comic relief..Her sudden fainting spell was her to a tee. I could just imagine the looks on Buffy and Spike's faces! lol Thanks for yet another wonderful update!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked that, I was afraid it had come out too mushy. :D

Aimée, well, she just couldn't think of anything else to get out of her predicament. Not that it will serve her for much in the next 5 chapter or so. ;)

Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 06/21/2006 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 34

Hmm I love this story but I would love to see a real old fashioned gun fight Clint Eastwood style.

Author's Response: lol, there'll be one or rather several, maybe not exactly gun fights as such, but a duel for sure. Thanks for reviewing!

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