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Reviewer: Alyxandria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 - 10:53 pm Title: Narration.

*Very* worth the wait. Sorry it took so long to review - I had personal issues all week and have been seriously lacking in the free time department.
I love the change of pace in this chapter. The different point of view was neat. And what a way to end a very hot make-out session! I'm thinkin' that they must have gotten everything taken care of before Joyce came in, otherwise Buffy wouldn't have been so happy. However, all that you mentioned about Joyce was that Buffy told her goodbye when she got out at school, so she could have very well walked in to them straitening each others clothes. Hmmmm.... I'm anxiously awaiting the next update. Good luck with the move!

-Alyx

PS - Thanks for the chapter dedication! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Alyx! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I hope RL has calmed down for you a little. More of the fic is coming soon, sorry about the delay!

Reviewer: buffypurple12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2006 - 08:56 pm Title: Narration.

Whew! That's hor! More please :D

Author's Response: Glad you thought it was hot! More is coming soon.

Reviewer: riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 08:53 pm Title: Narration.

lol definitely good and worth the wait-loved the way you told the previous evening-very cool!

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to do something a little different and am glad people liked it.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 08:00 pm Title: Narration.

Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 07:31 pm Title: Narration.

Loved it!!!
Nothing more nees to be said. :D

Author's Response: Glad to hear that!

Reviewer: Chakal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 06:55 pm Title: Narration.

Oh, my dear. What a time to interupt, indeed! lol. I loved the perspective you took for writing the chapter, it being narrated rather than being in the present. Made it interesting to read! Gah, anyway, update soon because that was just a tease! Haha. Great job!

Author's Response: Joyce picked a good time to come home, didn't she? LOL

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: Narration.

A question first: Will you post "Parting Gifts" here too? Or only at the BSV and your LJ? I have to bookmark the chapters then. ~ Awe, cute. When Spike came back the next day Buffy run off to change her clothing... And Spike didn't notice it (the older clothes) :) Awe, lovely movie evening *cough* and more *cough*. Hehe.. good it took Joyce so long so Buffy and Spike could dress again ;-)

Author's Response: Not sure if Parting Gifts will be posted here yet, but I'll let you know. Glad you liked the chapter sweets, thank you so much for ALL your lovely reviews!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 02:32 pm Title: Narration.

Very cute! Good thing Joyce had to unlock the door :D

Nice technique BTW. I enjoyed the way you wove the story with Buffy's re-telling of the story. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Yes, if Joyce hadn't had to unlock the door, badness could have ensued. *g*

Reviewer: Kill_Pineapples Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 03:43 am Title: Narration.

Wieh! Like the chapter ^_^ Also the banner thingy is very nice :-)

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 03:28 am Title: Narration.

Wow...haha...that was close! I hope they don't get caught and get in trouble! I'm glad they're getting closer! It doesn't seem too much longer until they take that next step. I can't wait to read more! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!

Author's Response: It was close, wasn't it? LOL. Glad you liked the chapter and thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Henina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 02:39 am Title: Narration.

Yes it was. I can totally picture it! I'll be looking for more!

Author's Response: Good! Glad you liked it. More up soon.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Narration.

First things first..Welcome back! LOVE THE BANNER ALYX!!

That was a GREAT make out session! I can just imagine yummy Spike taking his t-shirt off. lol Then the age old dance that at some point in our lives we do.....the OMG get your clothes back on dance.. : D BTW...the narration of Buffy telling Willow what happened that weekend. It really worked well! I'll be watching for the next update in the next couple of weels : )

Author's Response: Didn't she do a wonderful job? *pets banner* I'm soooo glad you enjoyed the make out session, it was VERY easy to write. LOL. I'm glad you thought the change of style worked for this chapter!

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 02:15 am Title: Narration.

What a time to interrupt! lol

I found the narration really interesting in this. Definitely a different tone than the last time. I really enjoyed the split story (Buffy's narration to Willow,/3rd person perspective). I found it a bit refreshing, but it leaves me wondering if this is a one time thing or will this continue? I don't know that it would have the same impact if all the chapters were like this one. Just thoughts, but i liked the interesting style break.

Author's Response: Perfect timing, huh? LOL. I'm glad you liked the style of this chapter - I was trying to change things up a bit and it's good the chapter was received well. But no, it won't be a permanent change.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 01:47 am Title: Narration.

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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