Date: 03/22/2007 - 08:35 pm Title: The Mall
Loved the update :) Like the shopping fun. Good to see Buffy and Harmony going along well (when it came to shopping). I liked the way Harmony acted in this chapter too. And I bet Spike will like the underwear Buffy got :)
Author's Response: Thanks as always. I think Buffy needed a friend, and Harmony's just not imaginitive enough to want to kill a Slayer.
Date: 03/22/2007 - 04:41 am Title: The Mall
I meant to say Spike in my post below. Buffy wants to look good for Spike. Not buffy.
Author's Response: No problrem, I was pretty sure that's what you meant. And thanks, glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 03/22/2007 - 04:40 am Title: The Mall
love this story. Buffy is so cute. She wants to look nice for Buffy. I hope there isn't too much trouble for our spuffy couple.
More please.
Date: 03/22/2007 - 03:17 am Title: The Mall
Looks like there's trouble ahead for Buffy. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Things definiately aren't going to go smoothly for her. Glad you're enjoying it, and I'll try and get the next chapter out soon.
Date: 03/22/2007 - 02:03 am Title: The Mall
Great chapter, it was neat to see Harmony getting along with both Buffy and Spike
Author's Response: Thanks, although I'm not sure if Harmony really got along with Spike. I think it was mutual toleration.
Date: 02/14/2007 - 06:05 am Title: Plans
Now THAT is an interesting turn of events. I can't wait to see how long it takes for Buffy and Spike to jump each other now that they're in close contact again! *evil grin*
Author's Response: Glad you like it. I think considering the slave/master past, they will have a few obsticles to overcome.
Date: 02/13/2007 - 08:37 pm Title: Plans
Oh didn't expect it! Spike went back to Buffy? I wonder what he wants. Oh sure, he wants another fighter in the war. But that won't "pay the rent" for Buffy even if she doesn't need to pay for it if she can live there. ;-)
I wonder how things will work out with Buffy there. Looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad the turn of events has you thinking. Finally got the next chapter up, so that should give you some hint of how things are going for our favorite couple.
Date: 02/13/2007 - 05:33 am Title: Plans
Great Buffy Spike reunion, I like this original plot. Glad to see the update, look foward to more
Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry my updates aren't all the frequent, hopefully it'll get better soon.
Date: 02/12/2007 - 10:02 pm Title: Plans
Glad Spike went back for Buffy. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're enjoying it. And the next chapter is now up.
Date: 02/12/2007 - 08:29 pm Title: Plans
I love this story, more updates please!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry I'm slow on the updates, but I just put another one up.
Date: 02/12/2007 - 06:07 pm Title: Plans
I love this story; made yet more tragic for not dwelling on the tragedy.
Buffy is finally being offered a life of sorts. I can't wait to see what she makes of it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Hopefully Buffy will start to see the opportunities she really has.
Date: 02/12/2007 - 04:28 pm Title: Plans
Something tells me Spike didn't come back to get Buffy to leave just because he wants her help in fighting the Initiative. A part of him wants to look after her. It is going to be quite an interesting battle Buffy, Darla, Harmony, Willow, and Spike vs. the Army.
Author's Response: I don't think Spike fully understands his motives, he just knows he has uninished buiness with a certain Slayer.
Date: 02/12/2007 - 09:18 am Title: Plans
Surprised Buffy decided to come along.. bored I guess and ready for a change. Guess she's been in the demon world and it seems normal to her.
Enjoyed.
Author's Response: Well, Buffy is without purpose, and doesn't really have any goals. I think she needs something to work towards, not to mention how longely she now feels that Spike is gone.
Date: 02/12/2007 - 06:59 am Title: Plans
I'm glad you're still writing this one.
Author's Response: I am, I'm just slow. But I just got another update up.
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:17 am Title: Rats
oooo this is soooo good, is there more coming , i hope so! i can't wait to see what happens. Do you mind letting me know when you up date it? thanks
queenlord_t@hotmail.com
Date: 01/12/2007 - 11:21 pm Title: Rats
Ah.. I should have thought about that: In this world it was Angel that got the chip and not Spike like in the series. No wonder Darla told Spike that Angel was ill. :)
Date: 01/11/2007 - 03:24 am Title: Rats
Good background, look foward to Buffy's return
Date: 01/10/2007 - 09:43 pm Title: Rats
Oh my, Bizarro World Willow and Angel with a chip in his head!
You write an incredible POV for Angel's damaged mind; the language is so very emotional. The last couple of paragraphs from Spike's perspective are also very telling.
This chapter is absolutely superb and really touched me.
PS. Angel's right: Spike is pretty!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. This chapter was kind of a pure indulgence for me. I mean I could have left it out and simply explained that Angel had been chipped, but once the idea had taken root in my head I just had to play around with it. So I'm glad you like it. And Spike is pretty.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 09:37 pm Title: Rats
Interesting twist, having Angel be the one to undergo the Initiatives special brand of mind control. Look forward to the next chap.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 03:35 pm Title: Rats
I like your concept of their little society. Very nice. Eagerly awaiting the next bit!
Date: 01/10/2007 - 04:43 am Title: Rats
So Angel has a chip. It's interesting to read Angel's experiences in the "white room". Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks. Poor Angel had it worse than Spike. Partly because he was in worse shape when they captured him, but also they did more experiments on him than they did on Spike. I hsould have more soon.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 03:32 am Title: Rats
great update. Is Buffy going to help fight the war?
Author's Response: Thanks, and you'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 01:35 am Title: Rats
I am going to hang in there with you as you finishe this story. I have enjoyed it from the begining becuase the premise is very interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks. And these days my life is much less hectic so I'm sure I'll get it finished sooner rather than later.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 12:31 am Title: Rats
Thank you for the author's note, it did make things clearer. This is all very good but the last part was wonderful. Spike's thoughts on their relationship, the feeling that he is intruding on something intimate, that last sentence...God. Lovely writing. Looking forward to more. Kudos.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I actually had to go check what the last sentence way, cause I couldn't remember, and you're right it is good ;). This chapter was kind of my induldgence of my love of Darla and Angel.
Date: 01/10/2007 - 12:17 am Title: Rats
Thanks for the author's note at the beginning. I really liked this chapter. Can't wait to see all the players as you've alluded to some we are quite familiar with...I assume.
Author's Response: All the pieces should start falling in place soon. And you're welcome for the note.