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Reviewer: Nikilicious Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2006 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

Briliant story!!!! Couldn't stop reading it.. made me cry in places it is that wonderful!!! Please please please post more soon! I love it, you are a very very very taleneted writer!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

I read your other story.. I don't mind if the stories are longer. It depends on your muse. If the muse is not willing it makes to sense to write long stories. I think I'm repeating myself.. but Buffy is lucky she has such a protective friend in Willow. And Willow told Spike a lot. Yet not much about Dru is handling Buffy. I wonder if that's the part or a part of what Spike thinks is missing in the story Willow told him. ~ Looking forward to the next chapter.. and to hear how long the story will be.

Reviewer: Klai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

I'm so happy you have updated :)! I've missed this story! But you are generous with these 2 last chapters.Time is up for truth! Slowly, but surely. Spike has understood there is "something" about the Summers family, but even if he has seen some aspects of Dru he didn't expected, he seems a little "blind" about her. Curious. Sorry to be crude here, but has sex always this effect? Well, I'm too mean. Spike is too implicated with Dru. And he couldn't know she's an awful sister (and human being?) until seeing her behaviour with her sisters. Willow didn't say all the truth about the new clone of one of Cinderella's sister, but all she didn't say talks (screams!). And Faith, she's not in the place, she's only told the way Buffy acts by his brother , but she sees perfectly that she's afraid. Spikey, you ask yourself the wrong question: it's not "What", but "Whom" she's afraid of... To answer your question about the lenght of this fic, I would say 10 chapters is a good idea, but it's because I'm impatient to see how it will end ;)! So, it's not a good reason. Let's make a compromise... 15 chapters? But you're the boss, and I'm sure your decision will be the best :)!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

Loved the update. Can't wait to see what Spike is gonna do. More please.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

great chapter

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

loved it and want more than 10 chapters

Reviewer: Lyndsy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 06:27 am Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

good chapter I can't wait to see what Spike's gonna do !!

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

WOW! Im loving this story! Ive never read living on the edge but I think this fic would be better long! :) I love it! Please post soon!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

I really love this story, so it doesn't matter how long or short it is, it will still be great.

Reviewer: Alyxandria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

I really like this story. I can't wait for your next update.
Wonderful job.

-Alyx

Reviewer: aoife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

absolutely love this story! i know you've just posted this chapter but please update soon!!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

Just discovered this story and read all 5 chapters. You are doing a very good job. As to whether or not to make it just 10 chapters should be your decision, but you ar doing such a good job filling in characters and the way you have Spike talking to Willow and then starting to talk to Dawn, I guess what I'm saying is don't rush it. Also, how about a little more background on Spike. Sounds like after his talk with Faith, something was going on in his past. If Drusilla should decide to do something more to Buffy, I hope she gets caught by Spike. Or maybe he could get more info out of Willow. I'm rambling now. Do lilke the story and please don't rush things to just do 10 chapters. Not much help, I know. Jean

Reviewer: Spikesonlychilde Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

I love this chapter! It's really great...and Spike has to figure it out soon - I mean he's supposed to be smart. When he called faith for help it reminded me of The Nancy Drew Computer Games that you can call her friends and boyfriend to give advice. lol. Great story. I can't wait to read more. And I like at the end how he's given Dawn "the" nickname. And how they are starting to bond. very cool. And yay! Spike is into Buffy!!! Great story. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: pretty_in_fangs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 4- Adult Conversations

Aww... The begining of a true Spike/Dawn friendship. It's a wonderful thing.
And my advice would be to make the story as long or as short as you feel it needs to be to say what you want to say. I know that's not much help. Turns me into the Mad Hatter "Begin at the beginng, proceed through the middle, and when you get to the end ... stop."

Author's Response: Isn't it just? This chapter's a bit unnecessary to the plot, but I felt like giving Spike and Dawn a real friendship, unlike so many fics where they just seem to know each other with no real grounds for a platonic relationship. But hey, I'm rambling... Thanks for the advice, I'm kinda leaning towards a compromise between the two. Enjoy the rest!

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