Date: 08/08/2006 - 04:05 pm Title: 12
I just read through all 12 chapters of this story and what an interesting read it was. I really liked the twist you put there for Spike and buffy. I also enjoyed how you balanced their stubborn personalities throughout the entire time Buffy was helping Spike heal yet still showed a certain vulnerability when the other wasn't looking.
I'm really looking forward to what comes next.
Date: 07/24/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: 12
No, Angel doesn't think.. the end of the world will kill the humans. Means no blood for the vampires. ~ And Spike started thinking now; too late? ~ And Buffy is caught by the police with Kendras's body. Ending with a cliffhanger I see; till next chapter!
Date: 07/24/2006 - 05:37 am Title: 12
Run Buffy Run!!
Date: 07/24/2006 - 03:00 am Title: 12
Not to criticize, but if you check the DVDs from the show, it's Acathla - not Acaltha. Figured you'd want to fix that.
Date: 07/24/2006 - 02:38 am Title: 12
And really...it was obvious she hadn't killed Kendra. Stupid Sunnydale cops.