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Reviewer: vamptasticA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Eight

wow...the tension was perfect. And poor Alicia, hearing that and not really getting what the arguments about but that your name was included and then thinking that you probably did it. Poor kid. *hugs alicia* I'm glad buffy's there for her!!!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter Eight

I'm diggin' it--Great updates! More soon, please!

Reviewer: Stine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 - 10:21 am Title: Chapter Eight

spike really has some issues... good chapter!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter, very emotionally charged. I feel so bad for Alicia. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter. The sad reality of a child with divorced parents who dislike one another is heartbreaking. The moment of realization every parent should have about how their behavior has affected the child they're responsible for sheltering from life's cruelness is just as devistating. Emotionally, it was a hard chapter to read, but you captured the emotions of everyone involved perfectly. Two thumbs up!

Reviewer: the_bends Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 - 06:08 am Title: Chapter Eight

Love this story, Keep it up :).

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter Eight

good update

Reviewer: katina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 - 01:06 am Title: Chapter Eight

Ok, the suspense is killing me. Are these two ever getting together? The guy your writing about sounds a lot like my husband..

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter, very good. One question though... how old is Alicia?

Reviewer: Sakurah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Wow Spike is such an a-hole. I thought Sam should of apologized though. Weather she meant for her daughter to hear it or not the fact is that she did hear it. Its funny in this story I hate Spike in your other one I hate Buffy. It's like you switched their roles. I'm curious to find out how you get them together in both. Please update soon.

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter Eight

I hope Buffy really lays into Spike over that?...when you are feeling guilty you get very defensive, but yelling in front of the kids is NEVER a good thing!!...really still enjoying this Brat although Spike will have to be houdini and evolve into a real human being...:)

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Eight

sad, but wonderful chapter. more soon please.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Spike is feeling guilty now? Then he starts to wake up ... I hope. Till now he was only a weekend dad for Alicia. Too bad that she wasn't confident enough to tell him she has a boyfriend; yet she told it Buffy. Looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Eight

I'm not quite sure how I feel about this chapter.

It's defintly a good thing that Spike starts seeing himself as others see him and that his past actions may have, and has hurt the ones he holds dear, specifically Buffy and Alicia.

I actually can't describe what bothers me a bit about this chapter. Maybe it's Sam, while others seem to like her because she doesen't give in to Spike's bs, seems very much the jilted, bitter ex-wife, and she does have reason, but apparently it's leaking to their daughter and I don't think that's right. She says it was an accident, and I believe her, but (that part) is unfair to Spike. What's we've been shown so far concerning Spike and Alicia has been on the most part positive, but it's just that he needs to spend more time with her to connect.

I don't know what just sits wrong with me with this chappie...but I will be awaiting the next one eagarly.



Author's Response: Well, you're not far off at all in regards to Sam. There's a story there that will be revealed, so you're not far off at all in thinking that Sam is not just bitter when it comes to Alicia

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Wow that was something. I feel for Alicia but these things happen. Hope Spike got some sense knocked into him

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Oh..Spike is one of THOSE people. You know the kind that has to see things for themselves for it to sink in. That is one stubborn man! He cuts off his nose to spite himself..as long as he makes his point, be- damded the consequences.. I've known and loved a few people like that in my day. I have a feeling when Spike "comes down" from his tirade, he will not be very happy with his own actions.

Looking foward to more, more, more!!!! LOL

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Eight

AHHHH< Spike is so digging his own grave,,,,when will he learn. Buffy's not going to believe him if he tells her how he feels. SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: BreannaStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Oh this is going very good, love reading it. So now that jerk Spike is going on to be a more enlightened Spike I can't wait to see where this leads :D Keep up the good writing.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Poor Spike. Oh, not because he deserves any sympathy at all, he doesn't.

I feel bad because he's such a fucking jerk and he's just beginning to realize it. He is such a 'man' really.
They go for the throat every time things don't go their way in misunderstandings.
Sam was right, Spike 'is' too buys whoring around to bother much with his daughter. Then let's be honest, he drags Buffy out there to cover for him for the day with Alicia.
It's a mess, no question, but I'm hoping Brat, that you can pull this off and redeem our blond boy.

Wonderful chapter, very realistic, I know this.
spuf

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 01:41 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Another excellent chapter...

Reviewer: Kimber Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Oh down come the hammer of reality once he faces what he just done......once the dust settles.......and he thinks back and hopefully sees how HIS behavior was bad bad bad....LOL......

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