aawwwww....... loved the last line.

yEAH!

I'm glad that they got that out into the open. I have to admit that you scared me in the beginning, but I thought that it ended rather well. Wonder how Buffy is going to react to that last line though. More please.

Away from the computer for a bit, and almost a dozen chapters to catch up on. Spike realizing the damage his behavior and attitude have caused to his relationship with his daughter was realisitc and hard to read. I didn't know how you were going to broach the romance, and having Buffy come on to Spike while asleep was an excellent way to cut to the chase. You've written two complex characters, and I'm enjoying their adult conversations.

"I'm going to make you love me."

Psh, that's definately a bold statement! Now, I'm wondering if Buffy's gonna swoon or bristle. Hm. Can't wait for the next chapter, and I've gotta say, that statement made me smile so wide. Awesome job and great update!

Again this is another Awwwwwww worthy chaper. Can't wait for the next update!

man, for some reason Bonnie Rait's sound "I can't make you love me " came to mind.......lovely chapter and now lets see Buffy's reaction and see if Spike can committe the same to his daughter........for should he also wish to be a better man for her as well......lovely lovely lovely

I've been reading, but resisted commenting... up 'till now.

I thought this would be another Spike-whore, Buffy-pure story where Buffy suddenly realises she loves him, he loves her and all his past behaviour would be swept away in the passion... and I HATE stories like that. It demeans both of the characters, IMO.

But here, in this chapter, you've actually written Spike realising his lifestyle is damaging, you've written him recognising what real love is for him, you've written a strong Buffy and... you've had Spike make a commitment, to change. I find that quite refreshing, and it gives me hope that not all new young writers are blind to some of the more damaging excesses of life.

Hopw that doesn't come over as too serious, but I do look for the social message in all stories I read. Fanfic is just as powerful as the stuff on bookshelves. It gives a message. I like to read messages that will give a positive example to people. This story seems to have found a way to tell it without losing the excitement - in fact, it makes the tension heightened...

Well done from me, and thank you.

Author's Response: I completely agree with you on having messages in fanfic as well as the books on the shelves. I try to have some kind of message, or theme to ponder and explore. This has been one of them. I don't like to make things rosy and light. I like to make them as real as I can.Thank you for what you said, it meant a lot to me :)

AWW that was just what i needed after reading another story where spike is the biggest jerk ever. awsome chapter. can he do it, more soon please so we can find out

That was a very smart move Brat..Bringing the dream world to reality..It allowed their subconcious to do all the dirty work..and when Buffy woke up she had no choice but to face the music of how she really feels. I LOVE the way Spike is thinking here. He knows that he has to become a better man all on his own to be worthy of the kind of love that can have with Buffy,

Very pivotol chapter...and it moved things along to the next level very nicely..I will be excited to see your next update!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I was hoping to move it to the next level and get the ball rolling with those two...Glad it went over well :)

Gaagh! Don't leave me hanging like this! More soon please!

Nice chapter Brat...although Spike does suffer from a bit of foot and mouth doesnt he?NEVER mention other women around the girl your trying to impress, always a bad idea!! However loved the little bit of Spuffy we got cant wait for the rest, and I'm thinkin he should be pretty good at it, he has hads lots of practise after all*sigh*....anyway as usual Brat PLEASE update soon. I cant wait for Buffy's reaction to his "I'm gonna make you love me" look out I think..

Author's Response: Yeah, he does have foot in mouth, though its not like she isn't aware of them all lol