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Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 - 03:16 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Did you say that your work is there but all wonky? I have, on occasion, fixed suddenly and unaccountably wonky work by doing a complete change of font and margins, that type of thing. I have no idea why the wonkiness occurred in the first place, but I was able to fix it that way. Of course the fix was trial and error so what actually worked is still completely unclear to me. Great help, huh? :-) I hope you are able to recover it. If not, the detailed draft sounds great. Thanks. :-)

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 07:41 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Oh, I forgot something - Spike is still the same selfish prick as ever, some changes aside. Not once does he consider that actually Gabriel might be better for her and make her happy. He is all about "I can´t live without you, yada yada.." but he never really thinks about what is good for her. It´s still all about him. That is not love, either. I´m trying to find any proof of his love, but he never did anything except take, take, take. Why can´t she be alone for a while and heal and then really fall for someone else entirely and have the real deal?

Author's Response: I get where you're coming from; even as the writer, I'm still pissed at Spike. But, part of this story is about how people can grow up and change for the better. Everything Spike went through in LA was part of this changing process, but he still has a ways to go. Right now, he's just saw her again for the first time in 3 years and emotions are running high... but the story's far from over. I'll understand if the way Spike has acted so far makes you choose not to continue reading, but it'd be really, really cool if you stuck with me until the end. =) I hope I wont dissapoint you.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 - 01:50 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

just started reading the story. how could spike be so cruel??? loved it though. spike is gonna have some major making up tot do in the future!!! great job.

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Ooh, I'm loving this. =) You write so poetically--I can really feel both Buffy and Spike's pain. Off to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 02:48 pm Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Great fic but so heartbreaking!! I hope Spike eventually suffers as Buffy is now! Please update soon!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 05:52 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Oh I love the start already! You have lovely writing style, and you like to keep things mysterious. Please update soon!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 05:07 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

It is not unheard of that some people do not want to move forward into a big career while in a relationship...Unfortunately Spike made this decision AFTER he took Buffy's virginity and it sounded like he also made some serious promises. Also, to actually say, " I do not love you." That was just at the height of bad taste..I mean, he could have left some small bit of hope that she wasn't a complete fool for loving him!

If and when Spike returns, I would hope that he realizes that he has burned his bridges..Not because I wouldn't want a Spuffy ending * of course I do!* I just would love to read about this character having to really work hard to gain Buffy's trust and affections back.

Whew..Now I don't usually write that much on a first review..So Kuddos to you! lol I am really looking forward to more ; D

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 03:39 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

good story so far

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Wow! That was. . .absolutely heartbreaking. In a good way, of course. (It just means you're a terrific writer!) i really love the plot in this story - I can't wait to see how you develop it! Please, please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thanx so much!
~Raven~

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 10:59 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Mmm heartbreaking begin. Though I don't understand why "I don't love you" should give someone hope. "I love you" would do that. Am I wrong? Maybe I don't get something important. I would definitely like to read more of this one. :)

Author's Response: Hmm... when I had her saying that, what i meant was that she knew something had ended and she was hoping that he'd say that he still loved her, despite her telling him to say that he didn't. If he refused to say it, then it would give her hope. I hope that clarified the meaning.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 07:59 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

this story is extemely interesting and i can't wait to read more! i can't wait to see spike begging to have buffy back thought! what a jerk! leaving like that, i hate it when men make promises they can't or don't keep! i can't wait to read more of your story! please update soon?

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 12:07 am Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Oh, definitely loving this story. I loved how you entwined past and present, and the emotion you imprinted in the story. Can't wait to read how it is going to evolve.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

I hope he falls flat on his ass....< LOL, lovely ass as it may be......he needs to fall on it.....take the girl's virginity and they run.......bad rude bastard, LOL. I hope she far surpasses his music abitlty.........great start

Reviewer: Sylvia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 - 09:03 pm Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

I like the beginning of your fic. And I hope that you update soon--this looks very promising!

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 - 01:55 pm Title: Ch. 1 I don't love you

Wow, how sad. Can't believe tha Spike was so cruel to her. You'd think that he's try to lessen the blow right after they...you know. It'll be interesting to see how Buffy handles a reunion with Spike. No one ever forgets their first time or their first heartbreak, and her's is wrapped up in one body. Can't wait for more.

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