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Reviewer: Verda Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:09 am Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

Hope that Buffy sees things his way. Your right about what the gang may do if they knew their identity. Maybe this will continue to push down her defences. Thank you for letting me know this was here. Can't wait to see which side of the fence he really is on. I'm betting it's the same as hers. Great chapter, Cas, thanks.

Author's Response: That is the main crux of the story - is Spike a good man, or not? Of couse either way, he still has a lot of enemies... but will Buffy be one of them?

Reviewer: Albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

I'm having a bit of difficulty beleving Buffy to be so clueless about all of this and it doesn't seem to be just something she's playng off of Spike. Even if she's never been undercover, she'd be more savvy about all this than she is here, even getting Spike's intentions. Her intelligence is sincerely being played down.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's a fine line to walk, and maybe I haven't found the best balance. But I apprecaite your comment, and promise that more is coming soon.

Reviewer: Albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

I'm having a bit of difficulty beleving Buffy to be so clueless about all of this and it doesn't seem to be just something she's playng off of Spike. Even if she's never been undercover, she'd be more savvy about all this than she is here, even getting Spike's intentions. Her intelligence is sincerely being played down.

Author's Response: Hey Albie. Glad to know that someone is still reading/responding although I haven't updated this story in a while. I hate to admit but it's been a while since I've worked on this one, so I am not sure how to respond. I mean to portray Buffy as naive and undertrained (which is Giles's fault - but turns out he's naive too all things considered). Anyway, anyway, you've single handedly insipired me to go back and take another look and get some work done on this story. So Thanks.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

I think Spike is right *gg* Buffy was very hungry because she hurried to dress so fast :) ~ Oh my.. that went wrong. I wonder if Spike is right and he killed the two man. BTW: the one thieve run away with the money... he didn't take the wallet I think (I guess in the walled were his credit cards and his identity card). Good chapter though. What a twist!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 02:55 am Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

good update

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

I'm really not sure what I think about Spike. I mean, he's VERY suspicious, but it could just be because we know that he's suspected of some stuff that things he does look incriminating. Gah! Great fic though, please keep going, I really wanna know what's up with Spike.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love your comment. I am trying very hard to make Spike ambiguous. It's hard, because he seems so sweet when he's with Buffy and I so want him to perfect (and mine). But of course, IRL no one is perfect, including Spike Thorndale.

Reviewer: DanID Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 9: Night Terrors

Uh..Oh...Spike's somewhat different morals are showing..This should be a little clue to Buffy of who she is falling for. Love how protective of Buffy Spike is in this chapter. You can really tell by his inner monolouge how much he cares about her..

Looking forward to more!

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