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Reviewer: Verda Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

Angelus has to be behind this, and his own mother's death? What does he think Spike's going to do just stop seeing Buffy and shack up with Faith. This can't be good. Poor Spike, now Interpol's on his case. Geez, he can't get a break, can he, now what's Buffy going to do? Just stop seeing him? just like that? Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: No, Spike's "luck" is horrible, of course, some one is making sure that bad things seem to just happen.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

I think that it is possible for Spike to have had something to do with the first three murders. But I just don't see Spike killing his own mother. I hope that Buffy can put everything right. More please.

Author's Response: Think of what we know from canon, and tangle that up a bit and you'll get close to the 'truth' in this story. Remember that Spike's actions have often been motivated by good intentions, but things don't always work out as planned.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

Oops.. Spike is wanted for murder? Oh my.. I guess Buffy didn't think of it. I didn't. I wonder what's the what behind it. Till next update!

Author's Response: Yeah, I seem to have surprised a lot of people with that, but I put it in the summary - guess it's been so long since anyone following the story actually read that... lol ! Just a little long winded here.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

What a bomb that has been dropped..I am beginning to wonder if Spike wasn't at one time a.....hitman maybe..That might be where he met Angel and Dru.. It's going to be interesting how Buffy...a Federal Angent no less reacts to this. I can feel this pressure build up..kinda' like a bomb about to explode. At some point I do believe that the crap is going to hit the fan. LOL Great update..and the plot thickens.....

Author's Response: Naah - too close to Criminal Games and others of that ilk. Think closer to canon. Truth will out eventually.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

Like the story but there is one thing that bugs me. I can only see this as being a happy spuffy ending if Spike knows exactly who Buffy is and what she does from a living from the start. I mean I can't see him forgiving her for betraying him. It just doesn't work like that in reality I would say, as a rule I would say that there is nothing people hate more than traitors. I think most people have a passionate disslike for people who are caught betraying their country much more than say your average murderer.

Even if he does love her he would never be able to trust her again and how would he actually feel knowing that she only got close to him in order to investigate him? I just can't see that it would have a happy ending. Not unless she crosses over to the "dark side" and helps him cover up what ever evil deeds he's done. I don't see that happening though seeing as Buffy is such a straight arrow and beliveing in right and wrong, black and white.

I like the general story and the secrets that is waiting to be discovered but as stated above can't see a happy ending that is really belivable. Have no doubt it will be a happy ending just not sure that I will buy it though.

Author's Response: Had to respond to your concerns as soon as I saw your post. I totally agree with you. Betrayal is hard to forgive, and I don't see Buffy going to the 'dark side.' That said, I think I have it covered. You'll have to let me know. Also I have two alternate ending points (NOT alternate endings, just different places for it to end), And I never promised happily ever after, not saying that it won't happen, just that it might not be what you expect.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

definetly a twist! i really hope you update soon! i can't wait to see spike's reaction to not being able to see buffy!! faith? i really hope he doesn't sleep with her? please UPDATE SOON?

Author's Response: Thanks. I think I kinda rush through the next chapter (when they're separated) because I don't really want to get into it too deep either, and like you I want to get on with it.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

great update

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

Oh my... we're getting to the heart of it, I see. Well, excellent job keeping me on the edge of my seat once again, and I can't wait to see more of this one!

Author's Response: Thanks Emma. At the risk of putting you off (its been plenty long already) this is where the story actually begins.

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