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Reviewer: Verda Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:38 am Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Yeah, I hate that she has to keep lying to him too. Disappointed that he had sex with Harmony though. So will Buffy when she finds out.. Guess I'm not going to bed, got to read more. Glad she misses him.

Author's Response: Well, he's male, and been practicing the absintinance for a while...No one ever said that Spike doesn't make mistakes. In fact, he makes a lot of them, but his heart is usually in the right place.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 06:50 am Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

i don't know about the laughing and saying it to be nothing part, but the rest of it sounds really good! Please, update soon? i can't wait to read what happens when or if Spike actually does find out about what Buffy is really doing! Keep up the wonderful work!!

Author's Response: I agree. And thanks.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

I hope she likes the picture. So many questions. Looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: Thanks - and yes, and no. Some questions kinda answered, more to be raised.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

absolutely loved it

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Oh Buffy! He is not going to say it was nothing. There is a reason he is so private with his life. Most of the people he meets just want to screw him over. Lovely chapter. I am curious as to how good the painting is. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks, and I agree. Spike is very cautious becasue he has been hurt badly before. Hope you like the description of the painting - I am not sure what you were expecting, but Spike's work is ...interesting.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

I'm disappointed that Spike slept with Harmony. I realize that he is single and has no obligation to Buffy, but I'm still disappointed. It was obviously meaningless sex. Hell, it took place in a motel. Beyond that occurance, I'm curious about the next chapter and the revealing of the painting.

Author's Response: Sorry I upset you with Harmony, but they did have a relationship in the show, and it was meaningless. I hope I explained his thinking so you can forgive him.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Interesting. I have some doubts to wether or not bringing in a listening device would be of the good. I mean an active transmitter is not that hard to detect if you have the right equipment and considering the security Spike has on his home I would think that monitoring the airways inside his house would be standard operating procedure. I have some knowledge on the subject and considering that he is not totally legit (or so it would seem) and the fact that he got the 3 techno geeks working for him having that kind of security would not be that far fetched. Instead of having to sweep for bugs constantly a passive system that monitors the airways inside the house would probably be a better choice. Monitoring is probably the best security measure around, so that you are always on the lookout for new potential problems.

Author's Response: You seem to know a lot more about this than I do. I too have some doubts about anything as coarse as a wire, and I think I tried to be vague about it. I just couldn't see Giles sending her back in there without some protection. And remember that there is no one else around - even if the system was picking up the feed, there's no one around to act on it. But yes, you are on the right track realizing that everything that goes on in the house is under survelliance of some sort.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Spike did buy Buffy excuse why she didn't see him; she should be save then. Mmmmh-hmmm so Spike slept with Harmony. I wonder if Buffy knows that too. Spike's painting? What will Buffy say to it? Looking forward to to find it out.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't sure about that, whether to leave it at supposition and hearsay or to verify it - but Spike did have a relationship with her in the show...plus I thought the contrast would be powerful - showing that this really is not about sex, he could easily get that elsewhere if he wanted.

Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Ack! I wanna see the painting! Need a update soon!!!!!

Great story I had read Criminal Games and I like how you have put a spin all of your own on it. Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks. It's nice to see a new name on reviews. We'll 'see' the picture soon - and it will be interesting. As for C.G., it was my original inspiration, and the set up is the similar, but don't expect anything else to be.

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