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Reviewer: Verda Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Oh crap! He is a tortured soul, isn't he! Something about that just breaks my heart. Don't quite understand why but my immediate response was cry for him. Don't know what you were going for but tears is the only response I have to give.Great read, Cas.

Author's Response: Yeah, don't know why, but he just grew that way in the telling. I mean yes, he was always intended to be broken hearted, but I'm afraid that he came off a little too weird and less tortured than I intended. As usual though, you got what I meant.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 08:55 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you caught up with it, and appreciate that you left reviews every time. Tell me what you think of this next one...

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Cordykitten, you've changed my mind on admitting I'm wrong. Looking at things from your perspective, I totally agree with you now. The strong distasted for this meaningless sex is back. Damn. :)

Author's Response: Yeah well, I'm assuming that neither of us is male. I think (sexist remark here) that men have a much higher tolerance for meaningless sex. I mean, you don't hear of too many women patronizing prostitutes.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

To your answer: Still I wouldn't like the thought if the man who thinks that we are dating (but I don't have time at the moment) sleeps with another women. I wonder how Buffy will take that. But maybe she sees it different. How would Spike have taken it if Buffy had been with another men in the weeks she had no time for him? Not good either I think. But we'll see it. On to the new part! ~ Wow.. the painting is good but Spike's unconsciousness painted the muggers in it. And Buffy did see it but not at once. Mmm-hmmm he painted her naked. Is it the way he sees her? Beautiful? I think so. Now I wonder what Spike will say to Buffy's question. (I assume Spike painted the man because he killed them (or thinks he killed them) for Buffy. Maybe there's more to the room too because is has a high security.

Author's Response: I think Spike knew that after the brush off for 6 weeks that they were basically split -although she didn't tell him in so many words, that's true. So I see it as he was trying to move on, but just really couldn't.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

good update

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Yep. Uh-huh. Creeped is a good word. Nyaghhh.

BTW, you didn't upset me with the Harmony and Spike bit. I just reviewed about a point that stuck out at the time I read that chapter. To me, Spike sleeping with Harmony on the show was a bit different. He and Buffy hadn't been seeing each other. The only reason I have a distaste about the meaningless sex in this story is because it happened with Spike having a strong and growing interest in Buffy - which seemed to mean so little as he goes off with Harm. I know that Buffy had given him the brush off, but we, the reader know why she did it. I also know I don't really have a leg to stand on here because Spike and Buffy aren't together and because HE didn't know what we know. It's just a hang up I have is all. I can admit I'm not being fair. :)

Can't wait for the update (good job wigging me out with this here chapter).

Author's Response: Yes, that's really the only reason I wrote the Harmony part in, because it did happen in the show. Also I thought the contrast between love and sex was good. Hope I didn't wig you out too much - the next chapter is worse, but then we get back to more typical stuff (sorta - I think I have a few more new twists on old favorites coming).

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Wow. I expected the painting to be good. The lighting and everything. But the rest is a little creepy. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yeah, a little creepier still, but then we'll be back to more plot having to do with Buffy, Spike and the rest of the gang. A few characters we haven't seen in this story yet will make an appearance soon.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

I'm majorly creeped out now. Why are they there????? More more more please! It's sooo good, and I'm not just saying that to be a review whoring for more fic, this is like a freaking mystery thriller story, and I'm on the edge of my seat. literally.

Author's Response: Thanks. It gets a little weirder before, veering back into more to do with the show.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Yeah- why are they there? Buffy has to be uber creeped out right about now. Another good chapter, and thanks for it!

Author's Response: The next chapter is probably creepier...would I spoiling things too much if I said then it gets better - less creepy at any rate...well, sorta.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Yes please tell her that you killed those two guys because then they will have it on tape and lock you up for life and nothing Buffy can do about it.

Author's Response: Far too obvious and simple. But it's going to be an interesting night.

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