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Reviewer: Verda Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

Very exciting going to read more. Thanks.

Author's Response: Love you sweetie

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

Now I wonder.. if Buffy had the wrong numbers for the key code and the panel shut down: This will be noticed the next day. Now try to figure out who had done it? It will only leave Buffy as a suspect. Looking forward to find out; and what she'll find in that safe.

Author's Response: Certainly it will be noticed, but who is in charge of security? And what will he decide to do?

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

good update

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

Why do I have this feeling that she is going to get caught? Hmmm. If Spike catches her I'm sure he'll end the relationship. Looking forward to update.

Author's Response: Yeah, probably. But what will Buffy find first? And what will Spike do when he finds out? Oh - and something else unexpected to complicate things in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

And she found.... come on! You're kiling me here. Oh, and I think she's right, I don't think Spike will want to see her again unless it's for revenge if he really is doing all these things... and then she might need her combat training. :)

I want to say thanks for the fast update! Another good chapter, and your writing seems stronger here to me. I'm not sure if it is more confidence, but you've done a really nice job here. .

Author's Response: I'm trying to post these next few chapters quickly, because it only leads from one cliff hanger to the next. Also, it's funny what you said about the writing. This is actually where I started writing this story, so I have had more time to get the language exactly the way I want it. This next chapter has probably seen the most changes, and its not my favorite ot the set, so I hope you agree it gets better - after the next few we're back to chapters I haven't drafted yet, so it may be longer between updates.

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