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Reviewer: Verda Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

What the hell's going on! got to find out who she is, sorry this is so short. Thanks.

Author's Response: Verda, this is driving me nuts cause I can't tell what review is to what chapter! Argh!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2006 - 11:26 am Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Please let Dawn know this only from hearing Anya talk about it. Good twist here- I wasn't sure if Dawn was going to find her way into this. :-)

Author's Response: Good guess. And Dawn won't be the only missing character to make an appearance. We'll have pretty much the whole gang before I'm through.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

A girl that looks very young and is cooking eggs with sausages and chocolate? Doesn't sound healthy, I mean it sounds as if the girl is a bit maddish. I wonder too why she said Spike was good in bed; she knows a lot of Buffy and Spike's relationship. *scratches head* Even of the break up or not break up part.

Author's Response: Well, she HAS been living with him. And as I've been told, this Spike seems to have a problem keeping his mouth shut, even when he should.

Reviewer: caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2006 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

cliffhanger!! why'd you stop? don't stop, continue right this instant! :) Great story, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it. Next chapter's been posted. As they all say, the faster you review the faster I'll post.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2006 - 03:40 am Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Okay, I didn't see that coming at all. I like that Dawn still has her weird cooking thing. But I think that I'll wait to comment on the rest when I actually know whats going on and am not so confused. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Okay, next chapter is posted and Dawn begins digging her out of the hole she's dug.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2006 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Good grief. What can I say? Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks jt! I'm thinking Sunday sometime for the update. More will become clear, at least in regards to Dawn.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Wow. I'm not sure what to think. Please, go on!

Author's Response: Ditto!

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Wow. I'm not sure what to think. Please, go on!

Author's Response: Thanks, this should help. Next chapter is posted.

Reviewer: Kerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Interesting chapter .
I'm guessing it's Dawn .Who she is though is a mystery .
A sister or daughter we don't know about maybe?? . Family member ?? . Someone he's taken in to look after over guilt in something he's done in the past ??One of his house staff's daughter or granddauhter ??
I wonder why Spike has never menioned her before to Buffy ??
Questions , questions !!
The possibiliies are endless .
Please don't keep us in waiting too long to find out .


Author's Response: The next chapter is posted, I'm not sure if its in this one or the next, but Spike's been trying to keep Buffy and Dawn apart - that's one reason why he was reluctant to have Buffy over. Not exactly who you want your potential girlfriend to meet at your house, now is it?

Reviewer: ImmotrtalRedhead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Hummm a interesting turn of events. Will be cool to see where you take it. Loved the update please add more :)

Author's Response: Yes, it does kinda derail the initial direction for a while by adding a more immediate complication.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

good update but really looking forward to finding out who this girl is

Author's Response: Of course it's who you think it is, as to just why she's there....

Reviewer: Alexiyanna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Thats Dawn right?...the long brown hair kinda gives it away...and what a cliffy!...cant wait till you update!

Alexia

It was bit funny to...i think i have a twisted sense of humor...hmmm....

Author's Response: Did you submit this twice? I think I already answered it. Anyway, thanks!!!

Reviewer: Alexiyanna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Thats Dawn right?...the long brown hair kinda gives it away...and what a cliffy!...cant wait till you update!

Alexia

It was bit funny to...i think i have a twisted sense of humor...hmmm....

Author's Response: Yes, it's Dawn. Glad you enjoyed the humor. I wrote this Dawn kinda similar to Anya, but a little less frank and a lot more cynical, but at the same time still a teen. Hope you agree that it comes off sounding like Dawn.

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