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Reviewer: Verda Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 33: Reactions

Can't wait to see what's Warren's angle. Spike's been totally betrayed. I wish that Spike could bring the whole agency down and get rid of them all. He's got Tara now,and I hate that she's all he's got left.

Author's Response: Once a creep, always a creep. And Spike has no idea of the extent of Warren's betrayal.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 07:50 am Title: Chapter 33: Reactions

great chapter

Author's Response: Wonderful to hear from you.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 33: Reactions

Spike really needs to talk to Tara soon. Poor soul. I really feel sorry for him. Warren has to be playing both sides. Hope he's caught by someone soon. It's just as well our two haven't bedded yet. It would be twice as hard on both of them. They both need Tara really soon. I have a feeling Dawn might help them along. Don't know why, but she knows how Spike feels about Buffy and I think she really wants them to be together. Will stop rambling now. Keep up the good work. I think you're doing fine.

Author's Response: Thank you. I think the UST is a lot of what makes the couple interesting. Of course, resolving it is interesting too. But if that is what readers are looking for, they should have probably moved on to another story by now.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 33: Reactions

good updates

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 33: Reactions

Duh...if Giles only knew that Buffy's 'work' was recorded. I wonder what Spike will make of the things he knows now. As for Dawn, Spike intended to send her to the school anyway. He would be still able to see her if he wanted. But I'll find out when I read more ;-)

Author's Response: Yes, Spike intended to send her away to borading school, but there might be more conditions attached now that social services is going to be involved, i.e supervised visits or none at all depending on court order. After all Dawn is not a relative and the relationship certainly looks bad, at least to those whose job it is to suspect that kind of thing.

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 33: Reactions

Boy this has really started to go off to left field...I cant really even remember how it all started...was this what you planned?or did your muse just wonder in a different direction?I was just wondering why the NC-17 rating, it just that in all the chapters there has been no sex etc, was it for the violence? Will there ever be any action between our heros, I believe in a build up but boy this is really taking some time, its chapter 33 and they seem further apart than ever!!! Anyway please dont think this is a flame , I just thought you might be interested in a different point of view:)

Author's Response: No, you're absolutely right. But where the story grew was at the beginning. I really began the story right about where Buffy meets Dawn. I don't know how it got so much longer and so involved. And really, there is too much plot - and it gets worse. I think I am going to end it earlier than intended to keep it from getting far too long and confusing, and then finish it in part 2 - which will be shorter and wrap up all the loose ends. As for the NC, well, it does get racier - but I agree its far too long a wait!. I guess I could have used a beta to help me cut it down, but that is such a long and tedious process, and I'd pretty much have to have the whole thing done before she could figure out what was extraneous... So you see by my ramblings how this story grew in the telling. Thanks for sticking with it this long - and for being honest.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2006 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 33: Reactions

Oh no! Don't leave it like that! Poor Spike- poor Tara!

Author's Response: Raproachment will be sooner than you think. It's good tohave Tara on your side.

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