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Reviewer: Kerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Interesting chapter .
I'm guessing it's Dawn .Who she is though is a mystery .
A sister or daughter we don't know about maybe?? . Family member ?? . Someone he's taken in to look after over guilt in something he's done in the past ??One of his house staff's daughter or granddauhter ??
I wonder why Spike has never menioned her before to Buffy ??
Questions , questions !!
The possibiliies are endless .
Please don't keep us in waiting too long to find out .


Author's Response: The next chapter is posted, I'm not sure if its in this one or the next, but Spike's been trying to keep Buffy and Dawn apart - that's one reason why he was reluctant to have Buffy over. Not exactly who you want your potential girlfriend to meet at your house, now is it?

Reviewer: ImmotrtalRedhead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Hummm a interesting turn of events. Will be cool to see where you take it. Loved the update please add more :)

Author's Response: Yes, it does kinda derail the initial direction for a while by adding a more immediate complication.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

good update but really looking forward to finding out who this girl is

Author's Response: Of course it's who you think it is, as to just why she's there....

Reviewer: Alexiyanna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Thats Dawn right?...the long brown hair kinda gives it away...and what a cliffy!...cant wait till you update!

Alexia

It was bit funny to...i think i have a twisted sense of humor...hmmm....

Author's Response: Did you submit this twice? I think I already answered it. Anyway, thanks!!!

Reviewer: Alexiyanna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 27: Who's There?

Thats Dawn right?...the long brown hair kinda gives it away...and what a cliffy!...cant wait till you update!

Alexia

It was bit funny to...i think i have a twisted sense of humor...hmmm....

Author's Response: Yes, it's Dawn. Glad you enjoyed the humor. I wrote this Dawn kinda similar to Anya, but a little less frank and a lot more cynical, but at the same time still a teen. Hope you agree that it comes off sounding like Dawn.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2006 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 26: Secret Agent Girl

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

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Date: 05/02/2006 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

great chapter

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Date: 05/02/2006 - 09:03 am Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

great chapter

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Date: 05/02/2006 - 08:55 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you caught up with it, and appreciate that you left reviews every time. Tell me what you think of this next one...

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2006 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter 26: Secret Agent Girl

I liked the part where she was worried about Spike finding her, not in an incriminating place, but in her state of dress. Really says what she thinks of him and his innocence. Great chapters. Although I am dying to know what his journal says and if Spike will talk about it all with Buffy. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks, that is exactly what I intended to imply. As for the content of the journal, sorry but we won'f find out for a while.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2006 - 11:32 am Title: Chapter 26: Secret Agent Girl

So far Buffy hadn't been caught. Hope they will be able to get back unseen too. I wonder why Spike didn't draw Drusilla after his mother died. A bad conscience because he didn't write about his mother after he meet Dru (meaning: if he didn't write about it, maybe he was to busy to do so? Courting Dru? Well it isn't that Buffy could tell him that. Spike doesn't know so far she copied (photographed) his personal journals. What a break of privacy ~ but will he found out about? More next chapter, huh?

Author's Response: No, at this point Spike is still sound asleep and has no idea what is going on in his house. Others besides Buffy are awake though...

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2006 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 26: Secret Agent Girl

good update

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

Now I wonder.. if Buffy had the wrong numbers for the key code and the panel shut down: This will be noticed the next day. Now try to figure out who had done it? It will only leave Buffy as a suspect. Looking forward to find out; and what she'll find in that safe.

Author's Response: Certainly it will be noticed, but who is in charge of security? And what will he decide to do?

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

good update

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Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

Why do I have this feeling that she is going to get caught? Hmmm. If Spike catches her I'm sure he'll end the relationship. Looking forward to update.

Author's Response: Yeah, probably. But what will Buffy find first? And what will Spike do when he finds out? Oh - and something else unexpected to complicate things in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2006 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter 25: Undercover

And she found.... come on! You're kiling me here. Oh, and I think she's right, I don't think Spike will want to see her again unless it's for revenge if he really is doing all these things... and then she might need her combat training. :)

I want to say thanks for the fast update! Another good chapter, and your writing seems stronger here to me. I'm not sure if it is more confidence, but you've done a really nice job here. .

Author's Response: I'm trying to post these next few chapters quickly, because it only leads from one cliff hanger to the next. Also, it's funny what you said about the writing. This is actually where I started writing this story, so I have had more time to get the language exactly the way I want it. This next chapter has probably seen the most changes, and its not my favorite ot the set, so I hope you agree it gets better - after the next few we're back to chapters I haven't drafted yet, so it may be longer between updates.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2006 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

Oh.. more faces in the pictures. But he tells Buffy now what he remembers. ~ And yet Buffy is acting professional; trying to get evidence against Spike. So she'll tell Giles about everything she saw there I fear think. Agent Buffy is in the driver seat. I wonder to what it will lead.

Author's Response: To more interesting discoveries, and a world of trouble. Buffy is afraid of getting hurt in the relationship, and the more afraid she gets, the more professional she becomes.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

Oh oki....well if it's only a panick button his loose lips might not sink the ship, I was under the impression that it was a recording device that was on all the time panick button works. You should also consider that if Buffy went into his study with the keypad lock at knight it would most certanly be logged in some database. The same principle applies to that as with any security meassure, if he almost never steps into that room at night it will probably get red flagged imediatly. To be honest I think that for some one who has killed peeople in his past he is not nearly as paranoid as he should be, even if he did it in self defense I would think that he would be a little more careful about what he says.

Author's Response: Yes, Buffy is definitely out of her depth in dealing with Spike's security system. She is not really supposed to be doing what she chooses to do in the next chapter. I don;t think Spike ever considered Buffy to be a possible threat - after all he knew and was friendly with Joyce for many years. And then there's the minor detail that he is in love with her, and thinks (hopes) that she might be in love with him too. I think there's a part of him that wants to come clean and be forgiven.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

I'm kind of creeped out about the image behind the waterfall, but in psychology, his subconscious showing through his painting kind of makes sense. I can't wait to read more of your wonderful story! Please update soon?

Author's Response: Thanks, and yes it is way more creepy than what I had first envisioned. But I equate this Spike as somewhat similar to Spike when first ensouled. Usually, but not always, holding it together.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

loved it

Author's Response: Thanks again.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

What a Brat! He's going to be so heartbroken! Aww...

Author's Response: Who's the brat, Buffy? I guess so. And Spike is definately heartbroken already, but its gonna get worse.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

Wow! Gret update. Perhaps Buffy should talk to Tara again and get her perspective on the paintings. The fact that Angel was i n Hong Kong with Spike leads me to believe he is definitely involved and more than likely set the whole thing up. Perhaps, he was the one that did the actual killing. I guess I just don't want to believe Spike is a serial killer, whatever.

Author's Response: Yes, she definately will. Spike has a good friend in Tara, and she will be a terrific help to him (and Buffy). But things will get worse before they get better, and then worse again. In some surprising ways.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

When Spike said that Angelus probably had something to do with the death of the Chinese girl, all I could think about was Tara saying the same thing. And maybe what I want to happen is influencing my judgment, but I still think that Spike is too broken up about everything for the murders to have been intentional, for him anyway. Either way, this was an excellent chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. Eventually of course we'll find out about all the accusations and what Spike has to say about it.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

Dang, I accidentally reviewed the first chapter when I meant to have it posted as a review for this one. :( Hope you can move it cause it could be a sucky situation for anyone reading reviews - they may be spoiled. Sorry about that.

Author's Response: NO Probs. Glad you figured out how to move or repost it. And Hey, it counts as an extra review in my tally column!!!!

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Gallery Meeting

Oh, is Harmony a prostitute in this story or an agent? I thought she was just a lose agent. Hmmmm. That really makes the sex worse if she is a prostitute. It may be a general truth that men do have a higher tolerance for meaningless sex, but that doesn't mean I accept it as ok. This is just how I feel about that subject - a feeling that will not affect the way I feel about your story. I still love it!

Author's Response: No, sorry to confuse you with my reply. Harmony is just a loose agent, and I don't think we'll be seeing or even mentioning her again. The characters will have too much else to deal with to worry overmuch about that.

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