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Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 24: More Pictures

Hmm can't really see Spike getting out of this one. Once the evidence is in he's a dead man. No two ways about it, I mean american prisons are filled with innocent people so I doubt that he would get off when all the circumstantial evidence points to him. Hell they even have an admission of him killing some one, be it in self defense or not. All things considered he would most certanly get convicted. I can't really see how he will get away from this, there are just too much evidence against him and the law isn't exactly known for trying to get to the truth.

Author's Response: Well, if you want to take the cynical route, you must also consider that Spike is a very wealthy and presumably powerful man. People with good lawyers typically manage to stay out of jail a la OJ Simpson. Plus almost all evidence against him has been illegally obtained (I would think - I'm no expert here.) Finally, only one of the suspected crimes happened on US soil. In order to try him for crimes overseas he'd have to be extradited and tried in the country where the crime was committed. Plus, via your previous comment, I'm not sure that the conversation is actually being monitored/taped, or whether she just has a panic button to call in help that is stationed nearby. What do you think?

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Cordykitten, you've changed my mind on admitting I'm wrong. Looking at things from your perspective, I totally agree with you now. The strong distasted for this meaningless sex is back. Damn. :)

Author's Response: Yeah well, I'm assuming that neither of us is male. I think (sexist remark here) that men have a much higher tolerance for meaningless sex. I mean, you don't hear of too many women patronizing prostitutes.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

To your answer: Still I wouldn't like the thought if the man who thinks that we are dating (but I don't have time at the moment) sleeps with another women. I wonder how Buffy will take that. But maybe she sees it different. How would Spike have taken it if Buffy had been with another men in the weeks she had no time for him? Not good either I think. But we'll see it. On to the new part! ~ Wow.. the painting is good but Spike's unconsciousness painted the muggers in it. And Buffy did see it but not at once. Mmm-hmmm he painted her naked. Is it the way he sees her? Beautiful? I think so. Now I wonder what Spike will say to Buffy's question. (I assume Spike painted the man because he killed them (or thinks he killed them) for Buffy. Maybe there's more to the room too because is has a high security.

Author's Response: I think Spike knew that after the brush off for 6 weeks that they were basically split -although she didn't tell him in so many words, that's true. So I see it as he was trying to move on, but just really couldn't.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

good update

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Yep. Uh-huh. Creeped is a good word. Nyaghhh.

BTW, you didn't upset me with the Harmony and Spike bit. I just reviewed about a point that stuck out at the time I read that chapter. To me, Spike sleeping with Harmony on the show was a bit different. He and Buffy hadn't been seeing each other. The only reason I have a distaste about the meaningless sex in this story is because it happened with Spike having a strong and growing interest in Buffy - which seemed to mean so little as he goes off with Harm. I know that Buffy had given him the brush off, but we, the reader know why she did it. I also know I don't really have a leg to stand on here because Spike and Buffy aren't together and because HE didn't know what we know. It's just a hang up I have is all. I can admit I'm not being fair. :)

Can't wait for the update (good job wigging me out with this here chapter).

Author's Response: Yes, that's really the only reason I wrote the Harmony part in, because it did happen in the show. Also I thought the contrast between love and sex was good. Hope I didn't wig you out too much - the next chapter is worse, but then we get back to more typical stuff (sorta - I think I have a few more new twists on old favorites coming).

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Wow. I expected the painting to be good. The lighting and everything. But the rest is a little creepy. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yeah, a little creepier still, but then we'll be back to more plot having to do with Buffy, Spike and the rest of the gang. A few characters we haven't seen in this story yet will make an appearance soon.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

I'm majorly creeped out now. Why are they there????? More more more please! It's sooo good, and I'm not just saying that to be a review whoring for more fic, this is like a freaking mystery thriller story, and I'm on the edge of my seat. literally.

Author's Response: Thanks. It gets a little weirder before, veering back into more to do with the show.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2006 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Yeah- why are they there? Buffy has to be uber creeped out right about now. Another good chapter, and thanks for it!

Author's Response: The next chapter is probably creepier...would I spoiling things too much if I said then it gets better - less creepy at any rate...well, sorta.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 23: Picture Gallery

Yes please tell her that you killed those two guys because then they will have it on tape and lock you up for life and nothing Buffy can do about it.

Author's Response: Far too obvious and simple. But it's going to be an interesting night.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 06:50 am Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

i don't know about the laughing and saying it to be nothing part, but the rest of it sounds really good! Please, update soon? i can't wait to read what happens when or if Spike actually does find out about what Buffy is really doing! Keep up the wonderful work!!

Author's Response: I agree. And thanks.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

I hope she likes the picture. So many questions. Looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: Thanks - and yes, and no. Some questions kinda answered, more to be raised.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

absolutely loved it

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Oh Buffy! He is not going to say it was nothing. There is a reason he is so private with his life. Most of the people he meets just want to screw him over. Lovely chapter. I am curious as to how good the painting is. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks, and I agree. Spike is very cautious becasue he has been hurt badly before. Hope you like the description of the painting - I am not sure what you were expecting, but Spike's work is ...interesting.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

I'm disappointed that Spike slept with Harmony. I realize that he is single and has no obligation to Buffy, but I'm still disappointed. It was obviously meaningless sex. Hell, it took place in a motel. Beyond that occurance, I'm curious about the next chapter and the revealing of the painting.

Author's Response: Sorry I upset you with Harmony, but they did have a relationship in the show, and it was meaningless. I hope I explained his thinking so you can forgive him.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Interesting. I have some doubts to wether or not bringing in a listening device would be of the good. I mean an active transmitter is not that hard to detect if you have the right equipment and considering the security Spike has on his home I would think that monitoring the airways inside his house would be standard operating procedure. I have some knowledge on the subject and considering that he is not totally legit (or so it would seem) and the fact that he got the 3 techno geeks working for him having that kind of security would not be that far fetched. Instead of having to sweep for bugs constantly a passive system that monitors the airways inside the house would probably be a better choice. Monitoring is probably the best security measure around, so that you are always on the lookout for new potential problems.

Author's Response: You seem to know a lot more about this than I do. I too have some doubts about anything as coarse as a wire, and I think I tried to be vague about it. I just couldn't see Giles sending her back in there without some protection. And remember that there is no one else around - even if the system was picking up the feed, there's no one around to act on it. But yes, you are on the right track realizing that everything that goes on in the house is under survelliance of some sort.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Spike did buy Buffy excuse why she didn't see him; she should be save then. Mmmmh-hmmm so Spike slept with Harmony. I wonder if Buffy knows that too. Spike's painting? What will Buffy say to it? Looking forward to to find it out.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't sure about that, whether to leave it at supposition and hearsay or to verify it - but Spike did have a relationship with her in the show...plus I thought the contrast would be powerful - showing that this really is not about sex, he could easily get that elsewhere if he wanted.

Reviewer: kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 22: Back into the Lion's Den

Ack! I wanna see the painting! Need a update soon!!!!!

Great story I had read Criminal Games and I like how you have put a spin all of your own on it. Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks. It's nice to see a new name on reviews. We'll 'see' the picture soon - and it will be interesting. As for C.G., it was my original inspiration, and the set up is the similar, but don't expect anything else to be.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time off for bad behavior

I would have loved to know Spike's thoughts throughout this time. Hopefully you will include some of them in the next chapter. You are doing an excellent job with this story and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks. I took advantage of your ideas and added a few things. Hope the next chapter answers some of your questions.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time off for bad behavior

Who reads summaries ;-) Only before I read a fic and then not daily after that :) So Faith and Harmony failed. I wonder if Buffy will ask Spike if it is true that he spent a night with her, Harmony. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Yeah, that's what I figured. Although she might not like it, Buffy certainly can't legitimately complain about his hooking up with Harm. They were definately on a break at the time, if she really does consider that they're dating.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 21: Time off for bad behavior

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 20: Accusations

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter 21: Time off for bad behavior

Hey- that clifhanger was not very nice. :-) Interesting that, after 6 weeks, he jumped at the chance. How is Buffy going to explain herself out of this one? another good update. :-)

Author's Response: I thought it was - at least you knew that they were going to get together again soon (as if they wouldnt?) And, yes, Spike did jump at the chance.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 03:16 am Title: Chapter 21: Time off for bad behavior

Poor Spike waiting for his crumb from Buffy, good chapter, more please.

Author's Response: Thanks. Like canon, Spike knows what he wants, but Buffy is afraid to give it to him.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter 21: Time off for bad behavior

Great update. I'm taking a very wild stab here, but does Warren have anything to do with some of the trouble Spike is in. Angel I'm sure does. Looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: Yes, both Warren and Angel are definate villians in the piece, but I think there is another too.

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