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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2006 - 04:31 am Title: Chp 8 Not Like Her

The Flashbacks are really effective at telling the story. I look foeward to the new chaper.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 09:04 am Title: Chp 8 Not Like Her

Poor Shanny.. if she wasn't so sure that her parents didn't love her and tried to talk to them when things got more 'normal' (if that is ever the case) and tried to get to know them, hear their side, maybe things would be better for her. For now, it's too late. Maybe she'll come around one day.
If she hadn't refused to speak to them *sigh* She hurt not only her parents, she has hurt herself too with that.
And Shanny has a picture of the children's father. More chance to find him... if the other knew of that.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 04:48 am Title: Chp 8 Not Like Her

What an incredibly well written chapter. You captured Shanny's emotions beautifully. I just love how you're fleshing out her character. The note from Joyce was a nice touch. Wonderful update!

Author's Response: thank you. I wanted to bring in Joyce. I think she would have helped Shanny if she’d been alive.

Reviewer: chanel #5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 01:22 am Title: Chp 8 Not Like Her

Lovely story. Shanny is so sad, I feel really sorry for her, and her life is totally believable. Keep writing!

Reviewer: readergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: Chp 8 Not Like Her

poor shanny!

excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: Chp 8 Not Like Her

I feel for Shanny but at the same time she comes off as quite childish. Being jealous of her own kids is a litle sad.but I suppose becoming a mom at 15 may have stunted her development a little. The little details about who the twins father is is further cementing who I suspect he might be. I am glad we finally got to see grown up Shanny's POV. Loving this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for your interesting comments. Yes, Shanny has never quite grown up. She is only 24 when the story starts - the same age Buffy was when she had her. And, of course, that’s half the problem - she knows she is not her mother!

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