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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 07:27 am Title: Chp 13 Just Children

Now the children are getting scared too. Feeling like being in a box? How will they get something to eat and drink there? It sounds as if they are stuck in a trap.
And in the middle of the whole mess (all of them missing the children but in their worry reacting different, like Spike starting to doubt Buffy's love for him ~ because of him being insecure?) Shanny arrives. I hope she'll hear what Buffy and Spike have to say. I bet she'll be surprise to get to know who the father of her children really is.

Author's Response: thank you, cordy, for reviewing so regularly. yes, I think Shanny will be devastated to learn who fathered her twins. But the adults are going to have to learn to work together.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 01:52 am Title: Chp 13 Just Children

I liked that Buffy noticed how selfish Angel is being. I could just smack Angel, the welfare of the twins is the most important issue... figures he would make this all about him. Loved the comedic bit where Buffy mused that Angel should have sent her a card to congratulate her on Shanny's birth.
Poor Spike. *huggles him* I can understand why he's feeling so insecure, his musings broke my heart. I hope Buffy finds the time to talk things out with him, they really need each other in a time like this. Can't wait for the upcoming confrontation with Shanny. Great chapter! Congrats on the wins! You really deserved them! :D

Author's Response: thank you very much. People are so nice and I love all the detailed comments about this story. Yes, Spike is really having a hard time at present. Will Shanny help or hinder finding the twins?

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 10:44 pm Title: Chp 13 Just Children

Great to see an update!!!!!! Seriously, awesome. Loved the chapter, and this whole fic! I'm going to reread it now just because I love it so much. I'm so excited to see more from this, and I hope we get to soon. Btw, congratulations! This plot truly is original. :)

Author's Response: thank you for your congratulations. Glad you are enjoying the story. There may be a delay in next chp because of going on holiday!

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