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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2008 - 02:49 am Title: Chp 17

good update

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2008 - 05:36 pm Title: Chp 17

Yeah, Buffy and Spike are not the main characters. So sadly you can't post here (I think) even though the story has both of them in it. Them not being involved yet isn't a problem. Otherwise there shouldn't be any xx/other stories here.
Glad to see an update on this one. :-D
Seems Joyce is coming more after Spike indeed. Just as insecure as Spike ("the others like Billy more").
So still no solution...
If nothing helps, maybe Buffy should trust the first Slayer.
~ Till next part, sooner or later.

Author's Response: Yes, for all her powers, Joyce has all the insecurities of her mother and grandfather! Not an easy combination for a young witch!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2008 - 01:21 pm Title: Chp 17

I find it very interesting that Joyce can see the First Slayer too, makes me wonder if she can see all the other girls like Buffy can.
And this musing of Spike's... He loved them both, but knew neither understood the other. Buffy loved Shannon with all her heart and soul, that he knew was true. Did Shanny love her mother? He realised he didn’t have any idea. Did she love him?... pretty much summed up their family problems in a nutshell. I hope this family can eventually work things out. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your detailed review. Much appreciated. Yes, this is a family in turmoil and now they are visible to Buffy and Spike, are the twins visible to the Slayers?

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2008 - 10:17 pm Title: Chp 17

Well, at least the twins and Angel are visible and inside the house again. If I were Billy or Joyce I'd be a little creeped out by Angel's attention to Billy. He's a little bit of a jackass for only wanting to get to know Billy better, poor Joyce. Now I have to wonder what the slayers want with Shanny (was her name changed from Shanshu to Shannon?).

Author's Response: I think adults, even vampires, can fall into the trap of liking one child more than another. Angel's problem is that Billy looks so like Darla, he can't see any further. And they named her Shanny because she arrived because of the Shanshu!

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