Date: 06/13/2006 - 04:50 am Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
LOL – I found your characterisation of Buffy in this chapter to be very believable. The first meeting with Spike was well described and I’m really excited to see where the story goes from here.
Date: 03/05/2006 - 11:06 pm Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
The dark humor of chapter one had me both intrigued and alittle disturbed. There were parts of the 2nd journal entry that had me nearly laughing out loud. I'm curious to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I't's the first time i've tried writing like this so i'm hoping it turns out well.
Date: 03/05/2006 - 08:53 pm Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
Hot!Doctor!Spike...great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hot doctor, indeed.
Date: 03/05/2006 - 07:42 pm Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
good so far looking forward to the next chapter
well done :))
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/05/2006 - 07:42 pm Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
good so far looking forward to the next chapter
well done :))
Date: 03/05/2006 - 06:19 pm Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
Interesting way to write this story. A bit embarrassing how Buffy met Spike but I'm sure he won't forget it ;-) I'm wondering though what's the matter with: The way I loved him so much ... I think it killed him. Anyways, it killed him. I wonder if she was figuratively speaking because she sent him away to protect him or something like that or if he is really dead because of her. ? ... I think you won't tell at the moment, huh? Till next part.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. He's actually dead in a literal sense, but i really hope it doesnt stop you from reading the story.
Date: 03/05/2006 - 05:53 pm Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
wow. awesome story!! completely~~ :D
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/05/2006 - 05:51 pm Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
Wow...That examination was full of sexual tension. We only know Buffy's side of things..So would I be wrong in my assesment that the good Doctor, was also feeling it? ; )
I can't help myself for reading this..BUT it's very hard knowing that there can be no happy ending..I mean, we know that he's DEAD! *sigh*
Good job with that chapter : )
Author's Response: Have you ever read the story "A Love Story"? I forget the author. But you realize in the first line that the girl dies, but you keep on reading it. It's a tear-jerker but reading about how the relationship develops was so sweet. i'm hoping that's kind of how this one will turn out.
Date: 03/05/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Ch. 2 (1st entry) Dear Diary Ch. 3 (2nd) Check-up
oh, interesting! I want to know more! =)
Author's Response: thanks!