Date: 06/13/2006 - 04:51 am Title: Ch. 4 (3rd entry) We meet again
Wow. A first kiss. I loved that Buffy and Spike’s second meeting was at the Bronze, and that they were so playful with each other – so flirty. Buffy’s words at the end of the chapter/diary entry are wistful, almost sad. I’m almost worried about continuing to read this story because it’s set up to have a not so happy ending, but I’m hooked.
Date: 03/06/2006 - 08:26 pm Title: Ch. 4 (3rd entry) We meet again
Oh ... truth to be told: If I had knew it from the start I wouldn't have read it (I don't read stories with character death very often). It makes me to sad. I'll only continue because I started. I'm stubborn sometimes. If it gets too much I'll tell you. ~ R.J. .. too bad he didn't get his coke by himself ;-) But Buffy would have gone anyway. That was lovely, the talking. Too bad it ended bad.
Date: 03/06/2006 - 04:35 am Title: Ch. 4 (3rd entry) We meet again
good updates
Date: 03/06/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Ch. 4 (3rd entry) We meet again
Sounds like those two just clicked...despite age difference..and propiety. Just instant ........click....
Can't wait to see how this story of Buffy progresses.! Thanks for updating again : D
Date: 03/06/2006 - 02:43 am Title: Ch. 4 (3rd entry) We meet again
A very different type of story, quite good. Definitely interesting. Sorry we will never see Spike's viewpoint on this romance. Keep on writing in journal style.
Author's Response: Yeah, i contemplated writing in Spike's pov, but decided against it. It kind of takes away from the entire feel of the piece. There'll be a point near the end where you'll HAVE to know what happens to him, so i'll have to find a way to fit that in. thanks for the review.