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Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2006 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

bad buffy poor sppike...

Reviewer: spikes_vamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

oh no.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

;-) not throwing pointy things, just sinking into despair...why is she so intent on showing him she's a horrible person? I guess because she THINKS that she's a horrible person...what could have happened to make her think that? whatever it was, she'd better get over it soon before Spike gives up on her on account of her breaking his heart...it's like she doesn't WANT happiness. or just believes that she doesn't deserve it. kinda sad. hence the sinking.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2006 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Oh poor Buffy! I'm very interested to know what horrible event gave her such a horribly low opinion of herself. Thank God Spike has come along to help her.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2006 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

great chapter

Reviewer: Edgehead Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty

OMG...is she really that stupid?
Now I want to know how Spike is...and how it will in the near furure.
Great Story

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I was gone and missed all the pointy things and I'm glad I did. I liked this chapter and know why she did it. She was kind of nuts to do that but I understand what she was trying to find out about her an
Spike. Looking forward to catching up on your new fic since I have been away

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty

*attempts to throw lots of pointy objects* (but my aim sucks so...lol. anyway, i do understand what you're trying to do and I know it's all for the great good of spuffy. i know it'll have a happy ending. i loved this chapter (as much as i hate buffy right now) i loved this chapter. please post soon. great work.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

So Buffy is on a mission: Make Spike see her for what she was? What does she think she is? Not worth him? Ah, I see: Because she was a horrible person. Well what she did was definitely wrong, she, Buffy, was using Spike. In doing so she hurt herself. Didn't her mother see that Buffy had problems? Because: Warnings: Rape, Child Abuse. Looking forward to read what Spike will say to Buffy.

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 01:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Your story has some good elements in it but I feel like your characterization of Buffy is not right.
Although you gave us some explantions of her behaviour , this slut playing makes me cringe and I don't really see or understand why she 's so blind not to realize that William is not like the others.

Reviewer: VSNJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Great chapter. Boy is Buffy fucked up. She need to wake up and Spike loves her .

Reviewer: Raspy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I don't hate Buffy. I feel for her. Something happened and we don't know what. I really like this story. I hope Spike doesn't get too angry...I understand why he would be shocked, though. What a way to wake up. If Buffy was actually talking to someone on the phone, it doesn't bother me beyond the fact she was using that to try and shatter Spike's vison of her. I think, if both willing, that kind of play can be kinky and sexy.

Reviewer: Diane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I think it's a good story.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty

ouch! I hope spike sees through her and still tries to make her see that he loves her! Loving the story though!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Self- destruction-- been there, done that (well, not *exactly* that -- but you know what I mean). I just hope Buffy doesn't get what she's trying so hard to prove to Spike, that she is unworthy and that he doesn't really care. It was a hot scene, and it would be interesting to see Spike take the lead, and for Buffy to give just a little, so *he* can prove what he feels, and how he views her. Hang in there and don't let the negativity get you down. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Tell me she wasn't really on the phone with a customer- tell me she called the weather station, her own cell phone, ANYONE but another customer. That would just make this... horrific. I get that Buffy is all with the self-hating, and wants to destroy the illusion Spike has of her, but this would really make her.. well, just *bad*. Has she even seen a doctor about this yet? Someone with a degree in Psychology?

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty

awww how sad!!! i dont get why she keeps doing things to hurt both her and spike. i know that she thinks badly of herself but her and spike could be good together, i just wish she would see it. i love this story and am so happy u updated. i really hope that spike understands wat shes trying to do and doesnt think of her like she wants him to. please update as soon as u can, im dying to see wat happens next between them. thanx

Reviewer: Forever Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Im sorry About Everyone Throwing Pointy Thnigs At You...

Your Doing Great So Far....I Luv It And Im Squirming In My Seat For More......This Is Great, Keep It Up!!!

Forever Luv

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I understand how someone can think so little of themselves to think that they don't deserve to be happy. It makes a weird kind of sense. But Spike has been trying to get her out of that line of thinking. He has been trying to help her. So I am mad at Buffy right now. Because even if she didn't know that his heart was in it, she knew that what she did would hurt his feelings. I have to wonder how they can recover from this. But hey, how much worse can it get? They are both mad at the other and hating themselves. Wondering what you are going to do now.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Wow, reviews are all over the place on this! Personally, I feel bad for Buffy. Sometimes its so easy to do something and you really don't know until its too late just how much it will hurt you and/or another person.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2006 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Wow, I didn't see that coming. It's exreme but it's bloody perfect, well done again lady. I agree with a couple of others who have reviewed, don't let what people say get to you. This is YOUR story, and in the Spuffy world messed up things are supposed to happen or we wouldn't have this wonderful site, right? Not all that is spuffy is meant to be fluffy folks. I think it's a refreshing change to have this Buffy, after all Spike can't be the bad guy ALL the time, so good on you and piss-off to anyone who doesn't like it, "if you don't like it, don't read it", thats what I do. Sorry I sound so harsh but I have complete respect for anyone who has the courage to post their work and hey, it's not like you get paid for it, it's a labor of love so I feel the need to protect any author who gets bashed. You can't please everyone all the time nor should you try. And btw, I understand this Buffy character perfectly you don't need to explain her, it's all there in black and white.
In messed up situations I remind myself of what my husband always says, "F*$k 'em if they can't take a joke". Update soon sweety I'm enjoying it and can't wait to see Buffy do some groveling for a change, woo hoo!!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I'm sorry I missed the author's note, cause I really would've enjoyed learning more about Buffy's backstory. Great story so far... can't wait to find out where things go from here!

Reviewer: meltedbutter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

It's awesome, this's the first time I read your story and I like it so far. You're entertaining me so much. Thanks. I'll be waiting for your next updates eagerly.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Just don't get why everyone hates Buffy! She's just a young woman who has lots of issues. Great chapter! Loved it!!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2006 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

AWWWWW i feel so bad for spike and buffy. please post the next chapter soon!!!!!!!! i love this story and i cant waite for more of it!!!!!!!!!!

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