Date: 07/12/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Man in the Long Black Coat
This is really good, it reminds me of Laurell K. Hamilton's books, with the vampires having the same rights and or being finally adapted into society. Cool idea.
Date: 05/01/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: Man in the Long Black Coat
great chapter
Date: 04/29/2006 - 08:11 am Title: Man in the Long Black Coat
Spike noticed something was off with the body (the symbol, the air smelling like tainted blood). Will Buffy believe him if he tells her? Looking forward to hear what Buffy will ask.
Date: 04/29/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Man in the Long Black Coat
Interesting fic you have here. I like Spike's rationalization of people- "humans certainly weren’t as stupid as they use to be." I hope, for his own sake, he doesn't say that people are happy meals with legs. That would be bad in this town at this time. :-) Anyways, I hope you have good luck with your bum leg.
As for a new title, I admit that a new one would be good, but this one does seem fitting to where this is going. The question is- what do you want the title to say about the fic. I gather, as I'm not a writer, that most fic titles are either things SAID in the fic, or about where the fic will end up. I hope that helps with your decision!
Author's Response: It is a classic Spike quote but I think Spike has enough sense not to say it but hell who knows where this fic could end.
The problem with title is though it suits the fic to a certain extent, it sounds kinda like cheap sci-fi thriller bought at an airport... Hehe I just want it sound elequent I'm just being a language snob
Date: 04/28/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Man in the Long Black Coat
very good--can't wait for more!