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Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2009 - 09:25 am Title: The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face

You write lovely dialogue. It's nice to be apprised of a person's character through dialogue. The casual but meaningful exchange in the park quite sweet but also realistic.

Reviewer: ChrissNicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 04:07 am Title: The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face

hmmm wonder what went down between liam and spike

Reviewer: v Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2006 - 03:57 am Title: The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face

very good read. thanks for the enjoyment.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face

Oh I know the feeling... going to work in the dark and returning in the dark. ~ Buffy didn't have it easy. Not when her mother died, not in her job. This kind of work and wear you down. No wonder almost nobody that works there is married (is divorced etc.). ~ Mmm there is a story behind William's story, right? Wonder what happened. I think he was a police officer too. On the street, patrolling. ~ Loved this chapter too :)

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2006 - 09:46 pm Title: The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face

Happy to see another update in the same day!

Poor Buffy seems to be caught in a rut..Looks like she needs something else in her life other than work. I like Spike's character...he seems to be very passionate about his job.

Looking forward to seeing what happens between BUffy and Spike. : )

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